Shooting Star
when you wish upon ...32 total reviews
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece is short, sweet, to the point and the message is clear. Beautiful photo plus colorful words equal an excellent piece. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
This piece is short, sweet, to the point and the message is clear. Beautiful photo plus colorful words equal an excellent piece. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks RR - Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and the picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o) sk
Comment from Deniz22
Nice, clean, poignant shot across the FanStory literary heavens. Beautiful picture enhances but does not overwhelm the words. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
Nice, clean, poignant shot across the FanStory literary heavens. Beautiful picture enhances but does not overwhelm the words. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5, and the picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely haiku-like 5-7-5, Art, with stunning visual imagery. What a wonderful last line: "wishes drip with dreams." It brings heaven down to earth. Good luck to you. Best regards, Jeanie
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
This is a lovely haiku-like 5-7-5, Art, with stunning visual imagery. What a wonderful last line: "wishes drip with dreams." It brings heaven down to earth. Good luck to you. Best regards, Jeanie
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Ah Jeanie - thanks again for the wonderful review and special rating! Love your take on that last line - it brings heaven down to earth ... ;o)
Comment from charlyann
This is great ...nice take on a 5-7-5 poem...great picture..last line is lovely...good job and best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
This is great ...nice take on a 5-7-5 poem...great picture..last line is lovely...good job and best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks, charlyann - Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and the picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from Black_Oxygen
shooting star stretches
within clear lake's reflection
wishes drip with dreams
With very few words, this poetry transports the
reader to a wondrous place. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
shooting star stretches
within clear lake's reflection
wishes drip with dreams
With very few words, this poetry transports the
reader to a wondrous place. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from wiljacro
HI! starkat/Bearing in mind the number of people that wish upon shooting stars, you have told the tale very well in only 17 syllables plus a perfect picture accompaniment. Well done you! wiljacro.
P.S. It would have been a6 but I've none left to give. w.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
HI! starkat/Bearing in mind the number of people that wish upon shooting stars, you have told the tale very well in only 17 syllables plus a perfect picture accompaniment. Well done you! wiljacro.
P.S. It would have been a6 but I've none left to give. w.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks, wiljacro. So glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and the picture. Appreciate all your comments and the thought of a 'sixer'. Yes, those shooting stars are carrying lots of wishes which might return to earth one day as dreams coming true ... ;o) sk
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem I like the shooting star and wishing for a star theme very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
This is a good poem I like the shooting star and wishing for a star theme very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks dmt1967. Glad you liked the theme of this 5-7-5. Appreciate your comments and good luck wishes ... ;o)
Comment from linsbm
Perfect syllable count of 5-7-5 poem.
Superb imagery in word pictures.
Very creative in the use of alliteration in 'S' and 'D'.
Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
Perfect syllable count of 5-7-5 poem.
Superb imagery in word pictures.
Very creative in the use of alliteration in 'S' and 'D'.
Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem and its imagery. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)
Comment from adewpearl
Gorgeous pairing of poem and art
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
nice alliteration in star stretches
and drip with dreams
You create a beautiful scene that is both easy and inviting to visualize and you create a truly dreamy mood :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
Gorgeous pairing of poem and art
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
nice alliteration in star stretches
and drip with dreams
You create a beautiful scene that is both easy and inviting to visualize and you create a truly dreamy mood :-) Brooke
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful review, Brooke. So glad you enjoyed this 5-7-5 and artwork. Appreciate all your comments, especially the one about creating a truly dreamy mood ... ;o) Art
Comment from Amused
Very nice! Imagery is beautiful and the artwork you selected is a perfect pairing. How often I have looked upon the lake and sent my wishes to the stars. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
Very nice! Imagery is beautiful and the artwork you selected is a perfect pairing. How often I have looked upon the lake and sent my wishes to the stars. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks Amused. So glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)