Return to Nature's gift.
Lorraine26 total reviews
Comment from micci
Wow I truly loved your poem the way it just flowed it was a very captivating peace, nature has a way of making us all forget our worrys and just get lost in its beauty
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Wow I truly loved your poem the way it just flowed it was a very captivating peace, nature has a way of making us all forget our worrys and just get lost in its beauty
Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from adewpearl
strong use of rhyming couplets
vivid and appealing descriptive detail
good consonance of D sounds in dew, bending, blade
man made kind - man-made
good sensory appeal in your descriptions that goes beyond just the visual, like the musicality of the babbling stream :-)
You create a most serene tone in this pretty scene :-) Brooke
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strong use of rhyming couplets
vivid and appealing descriptive detail
good consonance of D sounds in dew, bending, blade
man made kind - man-made
good sensory appeal in your descriptions that goes beyond just the visual, like the musicality of the babbling stream :-)
You create a most serene tone in this pretty scene :-) Brooke
Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from wolfgangdad
"excess of joy weeps, excess of sorrow laughs" Although I quote it, it is actually a paraphrase of William Blake. I love your entry in nature, living, or sympathetically imaging the life of a dragon fly or tree. The power of art is that it can awaken things within us. I'll be refreshed in the country but now I'm off to hit some neon.
Thank you
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"excess of joy weeps, excess of sorrow laughs" Although I quote it, it is actually a paraphrase of William Blake. I love your entry in nature, living, or sympathetically imaging the life of a dragon fly or tree. The power of art is that it can awaken things within us. I'll be refreshed in the country but now I'm off to hit some neon.
Thank you
Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is again a very beautiful poem with a good feel through the verses well done I enjoyed I liked the last 2 verses they finished the poem well regards Fuller Jill
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This is again a very beautiful poem with a good feel through the verses well done I enjoyed I liked the last 2 verses they finished the poem well regards Fuller Jill
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Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from guinea
This is very beautiful. I couls picture the scene in my mind. To say I'm alone yet not alone is so true. God is here. God bless.
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This is very beautiful. I couls picture the scene in my mind. To say I'm alone yet not alone is so true. God is here. God bless.
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Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Glorious!! Such very pretty words, excellent chosen art work.
Just looking at the picture raises the heart rate, and I can feel my heart bounding with joy. Very special poetry!!
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Glorious!! Such very pretty words, excellent chosen art work.
Just looking at the picture raises the heart rate, and I can feel my heart bounding with joy. Very special poetry!!
Comment Written 16-May-2012