Memory's Touch
Tetractys: Contest Entry56 total reviews
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Mrs. KT...this is an amazing tetracty. Not only is it beautiful but packs a great message, as well.
Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
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Hi Mrs. KT...this is an amazing tetracty. Not only is it beautiful but packs a great message, as well.
Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Soulester
This is truly a poem to savor, Mrs. KT. It is in fine tetractys form and spirit, and is power packed. I cannot think of a thing that would make it one bit better. This is surely an excellent contender the contest. Mary
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This is truly a poem to savor, Mrs. KT. It is in fine tetractys form and spirit, and is power packed. I cannot think of a thing that would make it one bit better. This is surely an excellent contender the contest. Mary
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from annienolan
Beautifully done. My imagination is going. Colourful, and use of words good. The theme is woven in a way that makes you think, search it out, experience.
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Beautifully done. My imagination is going. Colourful, and use of words good. The theme is woven in a way that makes you think, search it out, experience.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from shy1250
Superb--and short enough to stick in my memory for a long time! Love the artwork accompaniment, and have had the feeling of the truth your poem represents without the words to express it. So fine that in spite of the finality of death, there is much beyond its power. No suggestions or corrections. Kudos! later and God bless, shy
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Superb--and short enough to stick in my memory for a long time! Love the artwork accompaniment, and have had the feeling of the truth your poem represents without the words to express it. So fine that in spite of the finality of death, there is much beyond its power. No suggestions or corrections. Kudos! later and God bless, shy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Sally Carter
Simple - and magical. The flow is so pleasing, including the natural stop at the end of the third line. Your poem is just filled with warmth and assurance. Love it. Regards. Sally
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Simple - and magical. The flow is so pleasing, including the natural stop at the end of the third line. Your poem is just filled with warmth and assurance. Love it. Regards. Sally
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from tati
This
I have
Come to know:
Even death's claim
Holds no power over memory's touch
I read this well crafted Tetractys poem with amazement. Great choice of words, perfect presentation. Wish you the best of luck in the contest. (tati, Nov. 06, 2009)
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This
I have
Come to know:
Even death's claim
Holds no power over memory's touch
I read this well crafted Tetractys poem with amazement. Great choice of words, perfect presentation. Wish you the best of luck in the contest. (tati, Nov. 06, 2009)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi Diane, i love tetractys poem and you have made a wonderful choice posting your beautiful thoughts in this form. yes, memory is something we hold on dearly. wish you much luck with this.
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Hi Diane, i love tetractys poem and you have made a wonderful choice posting your beautiful thoughts in this form. yes, memory is something we hold on dearly. wish you much luck with this.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
There is a succinct wisdom as well as expertise in this lovely poem. I like the subtle contrast implied in "death's hold" and "memory's touch," and that here the touch is more powerful than the hold. A striking love poem. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
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There is a succinct wisdom as well as expertise in this lovely poem. I like the subtle contrast implied in "death's hold" and "memory's touch," and that here the touch is more powerful than the hold. A striking love poem. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Begin Again
Mrs. KT
I connected to your beautiful poem immediately because your words are exactly what I was feeling when I posted my short love poem. You did a magnificent job. Thank you for sharing.
Carol
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Mrs. KT
I connected to your beautiful poem immediately because your words are exactly what I was feeling when I posted my short love poem. You did a magnificent job. Thank you for sharing.
Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Judian James
Oh, it's so good to read something from your pen! How are you?? This is a lovely short piece for this contest. I flipped "touch" and "hold" just to try it out, and I liked the feelings that evoked to, a little less final on death's part. Just a thought
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Oh, it's so good to read something from your pen! How are you?? This is a lovely short piece for this contest. I flipped "touch" and "hold" just to try it out, and I liked the feelings that evoked to, a little less final on death's part. Just a thought
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
