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A complete story in written as a poem.

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Comment from Eternal Muse
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I absolutely loved it. What a great rendition of the Irish themed contest! You appeased the rhyming fan in me. Excellent imagery, visuals, filled with fun and humor, it was jolly to the last line.

God luck in the contest, this may be the winner.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. I liked reading your comment.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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A charming and delightful poem so suited for St Patrick's Day. Although I do not drink beer green or otherwise, I truly enjoyed the "visit" to Ireland.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Mary. I don't drink beer either or anyone kind of alcohol, but I loved the Irish parades in New Orleans and those participating had had plenty of the green beer. lol
Comment from playinaround
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I like the rhythm in the poetry. This poem is perfect for st Patrice day coming up. Well written, imaginative and fun to read Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you for a great review and comments.
    Happy St. Patty's Day
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Green Beer, is a fun romp through dreamland and old Ireland with the leprechaun as a tour guide. We are left with the sense that the dreamers mind is indeed full of Irish ideas, or he was joined in hisdreams by a frolicking spirit.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you for a nice review. I enjoyed reading ;you comments.
    Have a great day...
Comment from jmdg1954
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I'll never forget one st Patrick's day I fooled my kids. Earlier is put 3-4 drops of green food color in a pint glass. When it was time for dinner I poured my beer into the glass and had them believing I st Patrick's day magic.

Could only fool them once...
I enjoyed your poem very much!
John

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you, John. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for sharing your funny story. New Orleans is where I came in contact with green beer.
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent with truths, myths, and humor, if I may your first line
"...... will soon me here" should this be (be) here or have I missed something, none the less, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Than you for the nice reveiw and for noticing my typo. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I can't imagine green beer but i expect it is popular on St Patrick's day. We have an Irish pub in our town and their celebrations go on until the early hours. I enjoyed your jolly poem in tribute to this Irish day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Dolly. It is in New Orleans the bars serve green been. I've never actually had any. The Irish parades are really fun.
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a wonderful contest entry, I know in Chicago they also turn the river green for the holiday. This sounds like a dream I'd like to have, I wish you the luck of the Irish in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much for a great review. It was in New Orleans where the bars serve green beer. I've never actually had any. I did love their crazy parades where they tossed everything off the floats needed to make Irish stew.
Comment from JT traveller
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Excellent poem and very humurous. Perhaps you should have entered it in the Irish themed competition. The meter was spot on. The colour scheme and accompanying illustration were just perfect. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    It is entered in the Irish Themed competition. You scared me for minute but I looked and it says it is entered. I'm so glad you like it.
reply by JT traveller on 12-Mar-2023
    Oh dear. My sincerest apologies. I read "Humour poetry" at the top of the page. Great entry. Best of luckm🤞🍀
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Green Beer" eas well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
But I would suggest you add a little green moon cheese!
Doctor Ricky

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Doctor Ricky. I appreciate the review and your nice comments and suggestions.