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Heart Cafted Poems - 2020

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Musings of an old man -2020

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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great artwork, Jim.
-Your notes are appreciated,
and you are a special part
of the FS family.
-You wrote a very good
Christmas poem with
effective imagery that
is full of good cheer.
-I guess mom made sure
dad was going to enjoy
the season, too!
-The Yuletide greetings
are very much appreciated.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Dec-2020
    You are welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Merry Christmas, JLR, to you and yours!
Your rictameter encapsulates so much joy of the season! I'm looking forward to some of that "spiked eggnog" as I spend a great deal of time by our warm fire!

Stay safe and healthy!
Here's to 2021!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Diane, I mirror the same rigth back to you!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
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Great poem that definitely brings forth the elements of Christmas! When I got to this line, I chuckled out loud: "mom busy spiking dad's eggnog," It made me think of various reasons she might do that!
Thank you for writing and for sharing!
Susan

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Susan, Smiling back!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Yuletide', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank you.
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 22-Dec-2020

    You're very welcome :)))
Comment from Gloria ....
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Right back atcha, J. You did a terrific job this year with some fine poetry and prose and you have brought the Christmas cheer to everyone.

I especially liked the part about the sugar plums and Christmas carols.

A lovely rictameter and a joy to read. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you, JLR, for the wonderful Christmas greeting full of fun memories in the form of the well crafted rictameter! So glad that you joined us in Fanstory this year!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank you! have learned so much and everyone has been just splendid in everyway.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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You have introduced me to a new form of a poem. It has a festive spirit. Christmas is the best time of the year to spend time with family and loved ones. Even it is going to be at a low key, we should not lose the spirit behind it. Merry Christmas!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    So very well stated, we must cling to the true 'REASON FOR THE SEASON" year round. During eons past the desert fathers and mothers survived far more harrowing tests, I think we can use this test of faith to deepen our faith resolve and all will be well!
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi JLR
What a nice zippy poem for this season and yes all of above happening somewhere
You also enjoy the Xmas and New Year break and lets hope for a brighter 2021
Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from L. Kalere
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What a wonderful Christmas card for all of us on Fan Story. So much nicer to have words from the heart. I've never heard of a rictameter, but I like it. Than you so much...happy holidays.
Linda

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Linda, thank you!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a wonderful post reminding us of the joys of Christmas and the well wishes. Your poem sums up the yuletide, and your sincere thankfulness shines through!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
    Smiling back with much appreciation and gratefulness.