My Offering
Jesus My Savior has given His all; I give Him my heart.41 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend, Wow, this is truly inspiring. You had wonderful rhyme throughout the entire piece while sending a great message and giving comforting thoughts to the reader. A great entry, good luck! and thanks for sharing this. Wonderful notes as well. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Hello there, my friend, Wow, this is truly inspiring. You had wonderful rhyme throughout the entire piece while sending a great message and giving comforting thoughts to the reader. A great entry, good luck! and thanks for sharing this. Wonderful notes as well. ~Kerry
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Kerry, for your beautiful and very comprehensive review of my poem, and for reading it with a spiritual understanding. I'm glad you appreciate the scripture verses in my notes, too :-) Thanks for the rating of six, that's awesome.
God bless you! - Mary Kay
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mary Kay Bonfante read your writing My Offering.
You certanley know how to tell us readers of all the trail and tribulations you have been strong to keep your faith--
Smiles nice line- of how our Lord is your rock that will never fall apart. Gert
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Hello Mary Kay Bonfante read your writing My Offering.
You certanley know how to tell us readers of all the trail and tribulations you have been strong to keep your faith--
Smiles nice line- of how our Lord is your rock that will never fall apart. Gert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your lovely review, Gert. I don't seek sympathy from my readers, but help and compassion from God -- but in stating my situation, yes, you are also hearing my pleas to Him for help. Yes, it is my faith that He is our Rock, and trusting in Him is the only way! I am holding onto Him. Thanks again.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Mary Kay, I liked your poem for the Faith Poetry Contest, with all of its Bible references. I'm sure it will blow me out of the water! :) Good luck in the contest! :)
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Hi Mary Kay, I liked your poem for the Faith Poetry Contest, with all of its Bible references. I'm sure it will blow me out of the water! :) Good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your excellent review! It's hard to know who will win, as there are many worthy poems and I'm sure that yours is among them. Wishing you the best, also! - Mary Kay
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Thank you very much for your excellent review! No one knows who will win the contest, as there are many worthy entries, including your own poem about the condition of our world (yes, I took a look!). I wish you the best, also.
Comment from heavenempress
hi, excellent piece of work. I liked the idea behind the poem and how you managed to come up with it. Simple but powerful, I liked it. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others. Nice presentation and attractive image.
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hi, excellent piece of work. I liked the idea behind the poem and how you managed to come up with it. Simple but powerful, I liked it. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others. Nice presentation and attractive image.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much for the superb review and your very thoughtful comments! Thanks especially for the rating of six, which I greatly appreciate.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful Mary and I love the powerful message conveyed in it. He's always there. He is as close as our next breath. I've had quite a few near death experiences and He has always brought me through. I called on Him in distress in the midnight hour and He rescued me. He can't lie and He can't fail. I know that my Redeemer lives! I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
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This is beautiful Mary and I love the powerful message conveyed in it. He's always there. He is as close as our next breath. I've had quite a few near death experiences and He has always brought me through. I called on Him in distress in the midnight hour and He rescued me. He can't lie and He can't fail. I know that my Redeemer lives! I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey, for your beautiful review and personal testimony about God's faithfulness and how he has worked in your life and delivered you in your times of great need. Very inspiring! God bless you.
Comment from Gail Denham
Nicely done in giving credit to the only one who can truly help us - guide us, give us hope. We owe so much to God - but He only asks that we follow his guidance, receive forgiveness from sin, offer hope to others. And to be holy.
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Nicely done in giving credit to the only one who can truly help us - guide us, give us hope. We owe so much to God - but He only asks that we follow his guidance, receive forgiveness from sin, offer hope to others. And to be holy.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Beautiful response to my poem, a call for holiness. Thank you for expressing that, and for your excellent review. God bless you.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is beautiful writing, every singly stanza. The rhyming pattern is great, and the poem is clear and concise. But the most amazing part is your wording and how you express your feelings. Absolutely heartfelt and stunning, and you echo many of my own feelings. Thank you for this poem!
Terry
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This is beautiful writing, every singly stanza. The rhyming pattern is great, and the poem is clear and concise. But the most amazing part is your wording and how you express your feelings. Absolutely heartfelt and stunning, and you echo many of my own feelings. Thank you for this poem!
Terry
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Therese, for your excellent review of my poem, written so beautifully. I'm so glad it touches you on a personal level. I appreciate everything you wrote.
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Thank you
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is totally great! Talking about how much the Lord has done for me. Laid down his life for me! Paid for my soul with His life when we didn't even ask Him to do it! Thank you Lord for saving me!
Patty
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This is totally great! Talking about how much the Lord has done for me. Laid down his life for me! Paid for my soul with His life when we didn't even ask Him to do it! Thank you Lord for saving me!
Patty
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Patty. Your very personal and heartfelt response to my poem is very encouraging. Amen!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from evesayshi
A passionately rendered poem of faith, written in humble gratitude, almost smoothly rendered in rhyming rhythm, but for a couple of spots - easily corrected by reading aloud a couple of times - fully compliant with the theme requirement of the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
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A passionately rendered poem of faith, written in humble gratitude, almost smoothly rendered in rhyming rhythm, but for a couple of spots - easily corrected by reading aloud a couple of times - fully compliant with the theme requirement of the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for writing such a beautiful review of my poem. Much appreciation!
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You are very welcome, Mary Kay - thank you for sharing this work...Eve
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You're welcome, too, Eve. And thanks for your kindness.
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You are very welcome, Mary Kay, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, My Offering, presented in eight, AABB-rhymed quatrains, praises and offers more to the One whose grace and power allows us to surrender self and seek His face.
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This spiritual poem, My Offering, presented in eight, AABB-rhymed quatrains, praises and offers more to the One whose grace and power allows us to surrender self and seek His face.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review of my poem. I appreciate your clear expression of understanding of its meaning! Amen.
