Not Today, World!
Jesus won the battle.22 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
He won the battle on the cross.
Paid the price to set me free!
The world no longer gets to
have a hold on me.
The battle's done.
I see the Son!
He won the victory!
Sooo...not Today, World...
Amen amen amen...I could sing this all day
God bless and thanks
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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He won the battle on the cross.
Paid the price to set me free!
The world no longer gets to
have a hold on me.
The battle's done.
I see the Son!
He won the victory!
Sooo...not Today, World...
Amen amen amen...I could sing this all day
God bless and thanks
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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You are welcome! It helps me alot too! Thank you for the review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a tributary poem for the forthcoming Easter season, uplifting and faithful and I liked the sound of this victory, when you are discouraged you can feel infused with with your beliefs, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This is a tributary poem for the forthcoming Easter season, uplifting and faithful and I liked the sound of this victory, when you are discouraged you can feel infused with with your beliefs, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Dolly,
Thank you for the review! Yes, He does refresh us when the battle here gets tough!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written spiritual poem/song. Nothing in this world will ever get us down and under as long as we believe in our God and His Son, our redeemer and friend.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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A very well-written spiritual poem/song. Nothing in this world will ever get us down and under as long as we believe in our God and His Son, our redeemer and friend.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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You are a very wise person:) If we truly believe, we CAN have peace in this world! Thank you for the review and your thoughts!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
How wonderful that you have written your own life-chorus!! :) ;) This is a great one, Tina -- just makes the reader smile and want to find their own tune and sing along! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing, ma'am! :) ;) YVette
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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How wonderful that you have written your own life-chorus!! :) ;) This is a great one, Tina -- just makes the reader smile and want to find their own tune and sing along! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing, ma'am! :) ;) YVette
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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To think a reader may sing because this speaks to them!...how sweet! Thank you!
I can't say enough good things about the Lord and I love Him so much that I can't hold it in! I sing this chorus a lot, with victory!:)
Your comments mean a lot to me, so thank YOU ma'am!
Tina
Comment from l.raven
HI Tina, when I was reading it...it reads like song...very up beat...and I like the way the chorus sounds...love your poem my sweet friend...and what a picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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HI Tina, when I was reading it...it reads like song...very up beat...and I like the way the chorus sounds...love your poem my sweet friend...and what a picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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I wrote it as a song, so thanks for telling me you
could tell! Thank you for the compliments and review!!
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I wrote it as a song, so thanks for telling me you
could tell! Thank you for the compliments and review!!
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sooooooooooo welcome you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from bertodi
You have written this in a sort of hymn format, which always works well. Just read that you wrote it like a song. Well in my books, songs and poems are often the same and not far removed. Poems for me cover all sorts, from history to adverts. It is chirpy and sharp. Gives over its message well and repeats, as one does, the more important parts.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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You have written this in a sort of hymn format, which always works well. Just read that you wrote it like a song. Well in my books, songs and poems are often the same and not far removed. Poems for me cover all sorts, from history to adverts. It is chirpy and sharp. Gives over its message well and repeats, as one does, the more important parts.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much. Yes, this is a possible song, and I sing it through the house, mostly the chorus. Thank you for taking time to review and give me your input!
Have a nice day!
Tina
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful! Thank you for sharing your song of victory! Yes, it certainly is a battlefield spiritually everyday and if we get to caught up in it, we lose the battle but if we do as you say, look up to Jesus, Who won the battle already, we can rejoice!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Wonderful! Thank you for sharing your song of victory! Yes, it certainly is a battlefield spiritually everyday and if we get to caught up in it, we lose the battle but if we do as you say, look up to Jesus, Who won the battle already, we can rejoice!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Yes, you totally get it!! Thank you for the review and especially telling me what it meant to you. I am so honored with personal comments!
Tina
Comment from Teri7
This is a wonderful poem/song you have penned. I have needed that song in my life for the last week. Thank you for posting this. What powerful words you have penned. I am going to bookcase this too! love and blessings Teri
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This is a wonderful poem/song you have penned. I have needed that song in my life for the last week. Thank you for posting this. What powerful words you have penned. I am going to bookcase this too! love and blessings Teri
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Oh, thank you so much for telling me how it made you feel. It was on a whim that I suddenly decided to finish it and put it on here. I am so glad it helped you. What a treat to get this sweet note!
Have a good weekend. I will truly remember you in prayer as I scoot to bed soon:)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good piece, Tina. It had a good flow to it and the faith-based message was plain. Your faith really shines through. Nice job of writing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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This was a good piece, Tina. It had a good flow to it and the faith-based message was plain. Your faith really shines through. Nice job of writing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I appreciate the review! I tried to make it rhythmic so I can pick out a tune easily later...someday...My faith is everything, and I can't help but let it out of my heart sometimes. Thanks for reading it and giving me your take on it!
Tina
Comment from Gail Denham
Fine poem of praise for the Lord - and all that He is to us. "Not today world" a great quote for all of us - seeing all the evil around us - knowing that the evil in this world wants to take us down - but God.
Good poem
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Fine poem of praise for the Lord - and all that He is to us. "Not today world" a great quote for all of us - seeing all the evil around us - knowing that the evil in this world wants to take us down - but God.
Good poem
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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You hit on something! I may put that quote on my fridge! We need constant reminders that we are not losing the battle. I am glad you liked it. I just put another song up...I have quite a few I need to finish. God fills my heart up, and some days it just pours out on the page! I appreciate your review. have a great weekend!
