In the Mist
poem23 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I am glad you released it, even if it was not on purpose. Nicely done. Excellent imagery and so romantic as the two dew drops yearn and dream of reaching each other to someday merge.
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I am glad you released it, even if it was not on purpose. Nicely done. Excellent imagery and so romantic as the two dew drops yearn and dream of reaching each other to someday merge.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Mikey, this is a truly beautiful poem with lovely imagery. I'm glad you did release it. I really enjoyed it and it deserves to be read for sure. Take care, my friend~Debbie
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Mikey, this is a truly beautiful poem with lovely imagery. I'm glad you did release it. I really enjoyed it and it deserves to be read for sure. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Mike. Why aren't you supposed to post this? I am glad you did. I think it's a very romantic verse, myself. Iespecially liked these lines:
"One day a rose will blossom, dewdrops merge,
and dreams become love's power with the surge!"
Blessings and Good Luck Bob
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Hi, Mike. Why aren't you supposed to post this? I am glad you did. I think it's a very romantic verse, myself. Iespecially liked these lines:
"One day a rose will blossom, dewdrops merge,
and dreams become love's power with the surge!"
Blessings and Good Luck Bob
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
I am besode myself. A normal post with a notice and everything. I see you screwed up and joined the real world for a moment. I get this one and it is one of your best. I like the idea that circumstance just IS, it does not have malice. Fate can surprise. Beautiful. NG
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I am besode myself. A normal post with a notice and everything. I see you screwed up and joined the real world for a moment. I get this one and it is one of your best. I like the idea that circumstance just IS, it does not have malice. Fate can surprise. Beautiful. NG
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Mikey,
great to see you posting again. This was just beautiful. I cannot pick a best bit because it is all so touching. Your presentation is top notch. I am so glad you accidently posted this. It would have been a crime not to share it.
Brenda:))x
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Hi Mikey,
great to see you posting again. This was just beautiful. I cannot pick a best bit because it is all so touching. Your presentation is top notch. I am so glad you accidently posted this. It would have been a crime not to share it.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from BOO ghost
Nice title, Mikey. 'Purple Haze,' from Jimmy HENDRIX comes to mind. Or them purple cocktails BOO had in Misawa Japan that glowed. Descriptive personification of the two dew drops, unique presentation. A journey to a cloud commences ... yearning
answered with capricious hope to glorify. Nice trio of (c) alliterations here. Merge and surge is a nice word combination. Waiting for Star day, Lion King. BOO
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Nice title, Mikey. 'Purple Haze,' from Jimmy HENDRIX comes to mind. Or them purple cocktails BOO had in Misawa Japan that glowed. Descriptive personification of the two dew drops, unique presentation. A journey to a cloud commences ... yearning
answered with capricious hope to glorify. Nice trio of (c) alliterations here. Merge and surge is a nice word combination. Waiting for Star day, Lion King. BOO
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from Joy Graham
Nice descriptions in this lovely poem :) You taught me how to add more details into poetry, and I've been practicing. It's the same as show don't tell.
My favorite lines in this poem:
- "one hugs a morning glory..."
- "the moon gives way to sunshine with a sigh"
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Nice descriptions in this lovely poem :) You taught me how to add more details into poetry, and I've been practicing. It's the same as show don't tell.
My favorite lines in this poem:
- "one hugs a morning glory..."
- "the moon gives way to sunshine with a sigh"
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from ronnie k
"One hugs a morning glory climbing high" so amazing the gift of poetry has, I read and read and with each I find the one word for all good poetry is ART word painting.
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"One hugs a morning glory climbing high" so amazing the gift of poetry has, I read and read and with each I find the one word for all good poetry is ART word painting.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, Michael, this poem is enriched with elegant and innovative phrasing!. I love the imagery and personification. The wording is so lovely that I got lost in the mist, just visualizing the morning glory and hearing the moon's sigh.
The ending couplet creatively leaves the reader savoring the moment.
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Wow, Michael, this poem is enriched with elegant and innovative phrasing!. I love the imagery and personification. The wording is so lovely that I got lost in the mist, just visualizing the morning glory and hearing the moon's sigh.
The ending couplet creatively leaves the reader savoring the moment.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
Comment from Sasha
Have you been in hiding? I haven't seen your name in my inbox for quite some time. I do hop all is well with you and your family. I liked this poem very much. It flows smoothly and the rhythm and rhyme is gentle and soothing. Very nice work with this one.
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Have you been in hiding? I haven't seen your name in my inbox for quite some time. I do hop all is well with you and your family. I liked this poem very much. It flows smoothly and the rhythm and rhyme is gentle and soothing. Very nice work with this one.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
