We're off to Bali...
Holidays in Paradise.113 total reviews
Comment from Taffspride
Very well penned Roy, and I wish you much fun in your holidays.
What fun you will have with your rellies on these glorious shores, and think you'll not need wellies where you are going.
I loved this line.
These islands cluster, form one land,
Paradise for sure.
Truly I am envious, but will look forward to reading about your trip when you return.
Thanks for sharing, and enjoy!!!
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Very well penned Roy, and I wish you much fun in your holidays.
What fun you will have with your rellies on these glorious shores, and think you'll not need wellies where you are going.
I loved this line.
These islands cluster, form one land,
Paradise for sure.
Truly I am envious, but will look forward to reading about your trip when you return.
Thanks for sharing, and enjoy!!!
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thanks Ann, for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from misscookie
I love the photo is that where your at.
If so God bless and enjoy all you can
like you said you worked hard for this
I would always tell my friends, Don't send me not card saying you miss me... you know It's a lie.
God bless and stay safe.
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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I love the photo is that where your at.
If so God bless and enjoy all you can
like you said you worked hard for this
I would always tell my friends, Don't send me not card saying you miss me... you know It's a lie.
God bless and stay safe.
Cookie
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thanks Cookie, for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dustybones
Such a great and fun poem you have written about your upcoming trip. Have a good time. Keep writing and let us know of all the fun you're having . Let the good times roll. Enjoying life is what God wants us to do.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Such a great and fun poem you have written about your upcoming trip. Have a good time. Keep writing and let us know of all the fun you're having . Let the good times roll. Enjoying life is what God wants us to do.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
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Thanks for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from LisaD123
This is a very entertaining poem and the imagery is very powerful. The rhyme creates a sense of fun and the imagery is evocative of the enjoyment of being in Bali.It skillfully recreates the excitement we feel before we go on holiday. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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This is a very entertaining poem and the imagery is very powerful. The rhyme creates a sense of fun and the imagery is evocative of the enjoyment of being in Bali.It skillfully recreates the excitement we feel before we go on holiday. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
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Thanks again Lisa for this lovely review and wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from Galactia
Hi
I really enjoyed your poem of your family trip to bali. Lucky soul. I'm jelous :) i hope you and your family enjoy yourself.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Hi
I really enjoyed your poem of your family trip to bali. Lucky soul. I'm jelous :) i hope you and your family enjoy yourself.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 28-May-2016
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Thanks Tia, for these most lovely words and a marvellous review, and the lovely stars, blessings, Roy
Comment from dmt1967
I went there and, even though it was a stop over flight, I loved the heat and the people. I hope you have a great holiday and come home really tanned lol. Great poem and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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I went there and, even though it was a stop over flight, I loved the heat and the people. I hope you have a great holiday and come home really tanned lol. Great poem and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
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Thanks again for the lovely, gracious words and best wishes, blessings, Roy.
Comment from write hand blue
I found this to be a nice rhyming poem about going on holiday to Bali. It held me to the end and left me with good images.
Internet access can be dodgy in some of these places and I think that is what you are saying. This is on our list of places to go. We just missed a combined cruise with a five day stay in Bali over last Christmas. It was discounted too. We were/are sick as the proverbial. lol.
Good poem... ~Mel~
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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I found this to be a nice rhyming poem about going on holiday to Bali. It held me to the end and left me with good images.
Internet access can be dodgy in some of these places and I think that is what you are saying. This is on our list of places to go. We just missed a combined cruise with a five day stay in Bali over last Christmas. It was discounted too. We were/are sick as the proverbial. lol.
Good poem... ~Mel~
Comment Written 28-May-2016
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Thanks for these most marvellous, words and a super review, and really bad luck on missing out on the cruise and Bali visit, blessings, Roy
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Roy.
Hahahaha! Bali Bard, I love it. Great work mate. I can see you going over there and aussieizing them just as I have in the Philippines. Have fun and I'm positive that you'll gain a heap of poetry fodder there as I have here, in the Philippines. (I'm back here by the way, we flew in on Tuesday.)
Take care cobber and don't drink the water lol.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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G'day Roy.
Hahahaha! Bali Bard, I love it. Great work mate. I can see you going over there and aussieizing them just as I have in the Philippines. Have fun and I'm positive that you'll gain a heap of poetry fodder there as I have here, in the Philippines. (I'm back here by the way, we flew in on Tuesday.)
Take care cobber and don't drink the water lol.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 28-May-2016
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Well done Fez, yes I knew you were there, had a flooded home? Sorry mate, must have been sad, you've suffered worse in your life, well done, bro,
Comment from P1
aw i have to admit i do envy you a little bit but don't begrudge you. well written poem making me long for some real sunshine. in ireland the summer hasn't visited us yet. enjoy our holiday and maybe write something pool side... if not read you in two weeks xx
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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aw i have to admit i do envy you a little bit but don't begrudge you. well written poem making me long for some real sunshine. in ireland the summer hasn't visited us yet. enjoy our holiday and maybe write something pool side... if not read you in two weeks xx
Comment Written 27-May-2016
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Thanks for these most gracious words and a marvellous wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from kiwisteveh
Well, lucky you! Bali is wonderful, so have a lovely time.
Love the alliteration of the Bali Bard. Perhaps that could be your new FanStory name!
All your usual skill at rhyme and meter remains - let's see what a couple of weeks of family and sunshine can add to the mix.
Steve
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Well, lucky you! Bali is wonderful, so have a lovely time.
Love the alliteration of the Bali Bard. Perhaps that could be your new FanStory name!
All your usual skill at rhyme and meter remains - let's see what a couple of weeks of family and sunshine can add to the mix.
Steve
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thanks Steve, for these most gracious words and a super review, blessings, Roy