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The ultimate G-Spot

where's truly the Greatest G spot?

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Comment from tbacha58
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I offer this photo of my new love "Bitsy" that inspired this poem for me
And allowed me to find a place where true Gratitude would be
Where loneliness and sadness clouded my own G-spot in despair
I've now found its joy and constant Gratitude in the love that we share

Although I am not writing, i always pass by to see special writers that I care about, and you have no idea how happy I am that at last you found the peace in your within that you deserve. She does look amazing, you were missed, and hope one day we can meet, now that i live in San Francisco. Bless you always Vance. Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Thanks Terry for this kind and thoughtful message. It is wonderful to hear from you and hope some day soon we may finally meet in person. I have SOOO many HUGS stored up for you! Love, your friend: Vance
Comment from LIJ Red
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Deception. Foul trickery. I came looking for depravity and lust and found myself reading a faith poem. Almost as politically incorrect as prayer in school. Oh, excellent rhyming quatrains, by the way.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Gottcha Lij Red..thanks for reading and the stars! Hope it did not disappoint you as I really do mean this is the ultimate G-Spot! Vance
Comment from MissMerri
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Poetry like this is a stepping stone along the path toward Gratitude. You have chosen a theme very dear to my heart and expressed it so well in this magnificent poem. I loved every verse of this. Your many G- words added weight to the philosophy you expressed so cleverly here. Thank you for sharing this. I read it twice and enjoyed it both times. I'm glad you found Bitsy. A dear pet can add so much to life. God bless you both. Hugs, MM.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    OMG, you have hit my G-spot as I do so very much respect and admire the skill you have in sharing your deep and glorious emotions of love and Gratitude. Thanks so much for your encouragement! Vance
Comment from Jay Squires
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Such a lovely poem you've written here, Vance. I adore your use of Gratitude as the touchstone to the Almighty--as the direct source to God's love.

your feelings of gratitude for Bitsy reminds me of my gratitude for my shih Tzu, Serius. Our love for each other is unqualified. And that is the same Love of Our Lord for us.

May God richly bless you, Vance.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Thank so very much sincerely, Jay! Your wonderful skills and passion for expressing goodness, charity, and love on this site have created much Gratitude and I deeply appreciate your kind remarks and respect for the mission of promoting GRATITUDE to all of our friends on Fanstory. If they all grip this mission, the power of all these brilliant writers such as you can eventually make real and positive changes in our so deeply disturbed world. I'm committed to it and thank you for your important encouragement! Vance
Comment from Kassa-Leigh
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WOW! This is a great poem, my new friend! I enjoyed it very much, and it is so true. Gratitude is the ultimate Gspot. Lol! That's so creative! God bless!
Cheryl-Lynette

 Comment Written 04-May-2016


reply by the author on 04-May-2016
    Wow, new wonderful friend! what a joy to have this message of encouragement and praise of these lovely stars and blessed words! You sure hit my G-spot and I'm sincerely excited to meet you and shall come round to read your work. Please don't be a stranger.....Love, hugs, and Blessings! Vance
Comment from Dr. Nad
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The ultimate G-Spot is a very nice poem that provides a totally different outcome than expected from the title. You articulately and rhythmically explained to us the joys of a divine touch which is in every way far superior to a human touch. You lead us to believe that all positive touch is good, but the touch of our heavenly father is supremely best. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    Dr. Nad! so glad to meet you and your gracious six stars have arrived at my G-spot with sincere thanks! I hope to read your work and share more of mine in the future. I'm so glad my writing had meaning to you! Blessings, HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2016
    You are most welcome.
    Embrace the love from above!
Comment from michaelcahill
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Well, this was the best fun and you made it a joy to read. I love the picture which sets the mood with this contented little guy and you've chosen all the right words to support your point.
This is so positive and uplifting. I'm hoping a lot of people get to read this. Great writing and smart writing too. mikey

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    Hi Mikey! your comments are always a gift and I'm so grateful for your words and thoughts! I have pledged to myself to put every energy and skill I can muster to lead anyone and everyone to truly understand the importance of apprehending GRATITUDE as a state of mind that in pure peace and love. We spend so much time everywhere else ie: sorrow, remorse, anger, spite, hatred, guilt, fear and worry! These are all dark place we need not visit if we sincerely concentrate on creating our G-spot! Blessings and thanks, Vance
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
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Introduction and title aroused my interest but it took another twist when kept reading ,great writing style .Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    Hi Sealord! nice to meet you and thanks so much for your kind words and stars! I hope to be able to send poetic messages that will be helpful and positive to lead others to embrace GRATITUDE as the strongest and most positive state of mind anyone can reach. Tanks for your encouragement! HIS GRAYNESS Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
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The ultimate G-Spot is a place that your mind goes
Where: Love, God, Grace, Generosity, and Gratitude repose
Where dark anger and Grief are outshined in the light
Generated from a source of much Greater might
.................Well...that explains why I've never felt it before, Vance.
I don't know, nor have I had, any of those things in my life.

Well done, mah' man...

~Deano

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    Deano, yo Deano, It's like splitting the atom! Heavy matter to be blasted! Anger, Remorse, Guilt, Hatred , Frustration, Uncertainty, Fear , and Sense of RISK can rain mud on the windows of one's mind. But the curtains of Love and Gratitude keep the light of positive creativity, joy, grace, and hope always alive and well. We gotta hit the G-Spot every moment we can bounce our mind off the other crap in order to embrace true joy! You are sincerely a deeply gifted, brilliant soul with no right to be anywhere but in Love with yourself and love! I mean that with all honesty and sincerity! C'mon ova an get a permanent smile! Get onta that G-spot buddy and nuttin in life'l give ya any crap namore! Blessinz! Vincy !
reply by Dean Kuch on 03-May-2016
    I'll do my beast...e-r-r-r-r, heh-heh..., I mean my best, of course, Vinny.
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    AMEN. Deano...let's have some fun! Vincy
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello and bless you His Grayness
For your question where is my G-spot you did so well telling me in this part-

The ultimate G-Spot is a place that your mind goes
Where: Love, God, Grace, Generosity, and Gratitude repose
Where dark anger and Grief are outshined in the light Yes seeing the light of Jesus's love for us.

Gert

 Comment Written 03-May-2016


reply by the author on 03-May-2016
    Hey Gert: FYI, you will always be a permanent part of my G-spot!! Your mind, your words, your soul and your intentions always lead the heart there! I honestly, sincerely love you!! Blessings, Vance
reply by Gert sherwood on 04-May-2016
    Thank you Vance for your Kind thoughts.

    Gert