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Calvary.

Achieved our redemption.

89 total reviews 
Comment from lakeport
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Calvary, indeed that was a very sad day all of mankind... It changed the believe in God for many. Thanks for sharing it. Good luck at the contest. God bless you. Lakeport,

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
reply by lakeport on 03-Apr-2015
    you are very welcome,lakeport.
Comment from debskatz
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Hi Author,

THANK YOU for doing more than just spelling out "Calvary." I love that not only do you have perfect rhymes but put it into iambic tetrameter (except for the first line which is pentameter). Really beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing & good luck in the contest!

smiles,

deb


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much Deb, for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
Comment from walbc
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This very well written acrostic poem deserves 6 stars, but alas I have none left to give. Although I am not a "religious" person I do believe in Jesus Christ and your poem moved my emotions around and started me wondering.... Well done and good luck in the contest. Regards, Wendy.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much Wendy, for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
Comment from Javed05
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I like this poem....it is concise but covey your emotions well....it flows well and rhyming is also appropriate....thanks for sharing this....

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments. Is their a reason for only four stars?
Comment from meggie13
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Well written poem about the Crucifixion of Jesus. The picture used compliments it. He died for us so our sins are forgiven and we can enjoy ever lasting life. He is the way and the truth. Good rhyme and flow. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
reply by meggie13 on 03-Apr-2015
    You are welcome.
Comment from Alan K Pease
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What weight man has upon his shoulders with all the killing in the name of God. There is no love in the jihadists true unbelievers in any religion. Praise be Jesus for his message laid down on Calvary's cross.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much Alan, for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
Comment from Muffins
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The rhyming is wrapped inside words of truth, joy and hope . It shows the reader how this one act saved us, saved you, saved me from destruction in this life and the after life.

The tone has an angelic vibe to it. A calming affect. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for this fantastic review, delightful comments and great stars, I accidentally deleted the reminding six star review, apologies, happy Easter and thanks again.
Comment from Cogitator
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Sweet expression. Although we may have different takes on the Christ Nature within us, there is no question that it is within us all. Some people just don't look hard enough...John

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much John, for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Excellent Easter acrostic, spiritual and touching. I like your rhymes and flow, and you chose a fitting image for your poem.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Author, this is absolutely fantastic.
It flows so nice and the ease to read and follow each line is perfect.
What greater love.
Very nicely done and good luck

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
    Thank you so much Barb, for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments.