From our soul.
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Comment from Lainee
Pili this is such a deep and insightful look
at ones inner self. The flow of thoughts was
wonderful as was the peek into your world.
Goodluck,
Lainee :O)
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Pili this is such a deep and insightful look
at ones inner self. The flow of thoughts was
wonderful as was the peek into your world.
Goodluck,
Lainee :O)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2005
Comment from Winbow
All for the powers of discernment. Hey girl you do have that!
Once I read somewhere: "once you know the truth you die" made me think that one.
Lovely poem so honest, so pure and so humble. I think only great people can be humble. Those who are really in touch with their souls, like you.
Thanks
Desi
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All for the powers of discernment. Hey girl you do have that!
Once I read somewhere: "once you know the truth you die" made me think that one.
Lovely poem so honest, so pure and so humble. I think only great people can be humble. Those who are really in touch with their souls, like you.
Thanks
Desi
Comment Written 16-Aug-2005
Comment from Permelia
When you read this poem, it seems to bring peace and calmness to the soul. It is not only a lovely poem, but the photograph is one my sister would really like!.
I think sometimes the clouds are gathered over our head to help us when we are suffering the loss of a loved one.
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When you read this poem, it seems to bring peace and calmness to the soul. It is not only a lovely poem, but the photograph is one my sister would really like!.
I think sometimes the clouds are gathered over our head to help us when we are suffering the loss of a loved one.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2005
Comment from Sissy
I LOVE THIS!
First of all, it is so well written. Even when read aloud (I did this twice, I liked it so much), it runs smooth and easy.
Secondly, the pic you have above it is beautiful and the shape of the poem and colors only enhance how well it matches the artwork.
Excellent!
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I LOVE THIS!
First of all, it is so well written. Even when read aloud (I did this twice, I liked it so much), it runs smooth and easy.
Secondly, the pic you have above it is beautiful and the shape of the poem and colors only enhance how well it matches the artwork.
Excellent!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005
Comment from smiles_with_sunshine
>>>P>i>l>i>>P>u>b>u>l>>>
I have found it's our perceptions that form the clouds, because they are influenced by the "happenings" in our lives, which affect our reactions...each person's path to peace...to healing and wholeness, is uniquely different...no two people are exactly alike...there's no "one size fits all" formula, as some would have us believe...and that's why we are told not to judge......only Father (God) truly knows us, and only He can lead us back to His heart, where peace lives and has it's being....A wonderfully liberating poem...filled with timely and timeless wisdom for all who desire to walk and live in Truth...Thank you, Pili, for sharing another piece of your heart and soul with us/me...I was blessed. Take care and "BE" blessed.
:)s* smiles
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>>>P>i>l>i>>P>u>b>u>l>>>
I have found it's our perceptions that form the clouds, because they are influenced by the "happenings" in our lives, which affect our reactions...each person's path to peace...to healing and wholeness, is uniquely different...no two people are exactly alike...there's no "one size fits all" formula, as some would have us believe...and that's why we are told not to judge......only Father (God) truly knows us, and only He can lead us back to His heart, where peace lives and has it's being....A wonderfully liberating poem...filled with timely and timeless wisdom for all who desire to walk and live in Truth...Thank you, Pili, for sharing another piece of your heart and soul with us/me...I was blessed. Take care and "BE" blessed.
:)s* smiles
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hi Miss P,
Very inspirational... the flow and imagery of the piece is mellowing-- a calming effect upon the reader:-) Great read! Buddy
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Hi Miss P,
Very inspirational... the flow and imagery of the piece is mellowing-- a calming effect upon the reader:-) Great read! Buddy
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005
Comment from Elizabeth Clark
[ Ok, I really am convinced that you are my physical Guardian Angel]
I felt this pull so many strings within me. I have been stressed all day and this poem, excellant by the way, reminded me I have to pray and ground my emotions today. Mary
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[ Ok, I really am convinced that you are my physical Guardian Angel]
I felt this pull so many strings within me. I have been stressed all day and this poem, excellant by the way, reminded me I have to pray and ground my emotions today. Mary
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005
Comment from Diny
bathing my mind
with its light.
Great line!
Let my soul
arrive
to shores
of calmness,
I just did that! this weekend Got away and refreshed!
Not too sure if I meditated enough to be full of such wisdom as you
But it reminded me how good it was to get away
A perfect piece to read after a short vacation!
Write on
Diny
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bathing my mind
with its light.
Great line!
Let my soul
arrive
to shores
of calmness,
I just did that! this weekend Got away and refreshed!
Not too sure if I meditated enough to be full of such wisdom as you
But it reminded me how good it was to get away
A perfect piece to read after a short vacation!
Write on
Diny
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005
Comment from passions4life
Pili,
The peace that flows in this piece
is beauty in itself
within
to bring forth a feeling
a calmness within
my
heart.
Well done. =)
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Pili,
The peace that flows in this piece
is beauty in itself
within
to bring forth a feeling
a calmness within
my
heart.
Well done. =)
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005
Comment from Mrs Jones
Perfect Pili. Good line breaks and great words.
"to distinguish
without doubt
all that is false,
and the wisdom
to never
reject
truth."
Cheers
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Perfect Pili. Good line breaks and great words.
"to distinguish
without doubt
all that is false,
and the wisdom
to never
reject
truth."
Cheers
Comment Written 15-Aug-2005