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Percolation

The way a writer works

29 total reviews 
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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This is a good entry for the Acrostic Contest. Good descriptions of the thought processes that go into the creation a poem. I particularly like your two lines beginning 'Creative.... and 'Once.... - I can identify with these lines. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
Comment from misscookie
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The photo you choose to go with your poem
To me is a perfect match. Your words were deep and on so true of what a writer is or thinks before they start to pen.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
reply by misscookie on 28-Dec-2013
    You're very welcome Happy New Years to you and yours. PEACE TO ALL
Comment from Steve Pantazis
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It's so late, your poem is barely percolating through my brain, trapped in the spongy matter, dribbling into my neurons and synapses, slowly, slowly. Okay, it's time for some dream percolation. Good night. Yours is the last poem I'm reviewing for the night. It's bedtime!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your wonderful review. Happy dream percolation. RJ
Comment from L.A.Matthies
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Nice work on this acrostic and a worthy entry for the contest! Creative energy does flow uncontrollably once you get into a groove ...good luck!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
Comment from Deniz22
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I think I agree with you...completely! And I haven't even agreed with myself for a long time, so see how honored you are? Seriously, an excellent theme well structured. Kudos!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your kind comments, I am honored. RJ
Comment from goompa
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YOur work touches upon the nature of the creative process. While there is still an aura of mysery associated with, people are beginning to understand it better, and indeed the type of percolation you refer to seems to be an important part of the process. Great job!

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your nice comments. RJ
Comment from DALLAS01
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What a great look at the creative process. Love the word percolation. this is an exceptional acrostic. My favorite line is: Our own mulling stage now complete, ready

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your nice comments. RJ
reply by DALLAS01 on 26-Dec-2013
    You're welcome.
Comment from B. Diehl
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This is an amazing acrostic poem. I've never tried writing one of these...and I'm sure it is nowhere near as easy as it looks. You are very talented, my friend.

Much love.

-B<3

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your review and comments. This is one of my favorite styles, mostly because it is a challenge for me to make sure it means something when it flows together. RJ
Comment from ragamuffin
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I believe you've hit the nail right on the head with this as to how the creative thought processes flow for the writer. Perfect word for the acrostic, percolation. The word itself creates a sound, sight, and feel that fits your poem well. Clever and well done with spot on description.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your review and nice comments. RJ
Comment from michaelcahill
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Cool choice for an acrostic and not an easy one. It gave you no problem though and you took it down with no problem. Great word choice throughout and clear meaning as your message comes through beautifully. Excellent job and a strong contender. I can't believe I never ran into you before. Well, nice to meet you! mikey

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
    Thank you for your review and comments. It is nice that you have found me. Try a couple more of my pieces. RJ