Savannah Love
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Barbara. I haven't read much of your work but I believe I will in future. Your vocabulary is great. Dialog wonderful and you make your reader want to participate in the write. Great stuff! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Hi Barbara. I haven't read much of your work but I believe I will in future. Your vocabulary is great. Dialog wonderful and you make your reader want to participate in the write. Great stuff! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 20-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting chapter. There is lots of drama happening. The dialogue is good. The characters are intriguing.
Barbara
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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This is a very interesting chapter. There is lots of drama happening. The dialogue is good. The characters are intriguing.
Barbara
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Well what happened to Tyler and Daniel was intriguing and odd, to say the least. Naturally Billy is suspecting that Paige may have hired someone to provide special effects in the house and do those things, but I don't think so. If someone is doing that, it's not her.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Well what happened to Tyler and Daniel was intriguing and odd, to say the least. Naturally Billy is suspecting that Paige may have hired someone to provide special effects in the house and do those things, but I don't think so. If someone is doing that, it's not her.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Stubborn menfolk! I don't think Cash or Billy Jo are going to believe in Bookman's ghost until they get their own haunting up close and personal. Sure hope you got something nasty planned for those two - not fatal just nasty :0) Bev
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Stubborn menfolk! I don't think Cash or Billy Jo are going to believe in Bookman's ghost until they get their own haunting up close and personal. Sure hope you got something nasty planned for those two - not fatal just nasty :0) Bev
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, I do.
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Oh, good, barbara. You're very welcome! :0) Bev
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
CONSIDER:
"Both Tyler and Daniel SAID THAT somebody kicked them in the butt."
"...but Tyler and Daniel (will swear)or SWORE that the house
The plot thickens but they sure spend a lot of time 'fleeing' Atlanta. A good read though.
Regards:
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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CONSIDER:
"Both Tyler and Daniel SAID THAT somebody kicked them in the butt."
"...but Tyler and Daniel (will swear)or SWORE that the house
The plot thickens but they sure spend a lot of time 'fleeing' Atlanta. A good read though.
Regards:
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your assistance with this post.
Comment from Sasha
I definitely do not believe Paige would lie about something like that. Cash is a bit too quick to suspect her, but he just wants a logical explanation for something that has no logic. Great chapter and I anxiously look forward to reading the next one.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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I definitely do not believe Paige would lie about something like that. Cash is a bit too quick to suspect her, but he just wants a logical explanation for something that has no logic. Great chapter and I anxiously look forward to reading the next one.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Paige did not lie.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Oh, the suspense! A well written chapter with good dialogue.
My haunted house has only friendly ghosts, thank goodness. I enjoyed this chapter~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Oh, the suspense! A well written chapter with good dialogue.
My haunted house has only friendly ghosts, thank goodness. I enjoyed this chapter~Debbie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Well done. Great dialogue and smooth plot progression. So, the house has been very active, it seems, while Paige has been away. I wish Cash and Billy Joe would believe her. Something tells me their doubts will be put to rest before long!
raspberry white chocolate chip pancakes. - What??? I didn't know there were such things. Sound yummy!
Very enjoyable, my friend.
Hugs,
Av
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Well done. Great dialogue and smooth plot progression. So, the house has been very active, it seems, while Paige has been away. I wish Cash and Billy Joe would believe her. Something tells me their doubts will be put to rest before long!
raspberry white chocolate chip pancakes. - What??? I didn't know there were such things. Sound yummy!
Very enjoyable, my friend.
Hugs,
Av
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, there are such a thing.
Comment from denhagan
This was an interesting chapter story to read about Cash, Billy Joe, Paige and Mary Pat taking a trip to Savannah, and discussing the fact that their house might be haunted.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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This was an interesting chapter story to read about Cash, Billy Joe, Paige and Mary Pat taking a trip to Savannah, and discussing the fact that their house might be haunted.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome Barbara,
Dennis
Comment from Twilightspire
Lol. You are right, confusing, but very enjoyable. The dialogue is amazing and very real. The story read professionally, moving forward at a great pace and giving just the information that was needed and left a lot of trust to your readers. Excellent work. I've read some of your earlier chapters and it's fun to see where you went with it.
Take care.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Lol. You are right, confusing, but very enjoyable. The dialogue is amazing and very real. The story read professionally, moving forward at a great pace and giving just the information that was needed and left a lot of trust to your readers. Excellent work. I've read some of your earlier chapters and it's fun to see where you went with it.
Take care.
-T.J.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
