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Mermaid queen

A Terzanelle, see foot note

50 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Awesome ability to use the Terzanelle form of poetry. Your rhyming patterns are flowing so well and the details and word choices you use continuously fit the theme of your topic. A great read!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from karenina
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Loved the poem
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The background color is ex a copy what I w a Mr to paint my bedroom

(I digress)

The rules for the darn form have caused my brain to implode....

All of that and the summation is it was a superior read with some semi Einstein like rhyme scheme e me I could never a accomplish and survive!

Cherries to you!

Well done!

Karenina

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
reply by karenina on 02-Apr-2018
    Yikes! What happened to that effort at typing!
    Sorry!
    Karenina
Comment from Ronni
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Beautiful and brilliant poem, there has always been a dreamy kind of mystery
mermaids and their mysterious sea/ocean life and world. You have
made this one so very enchanting and enticing to dwell on. Gorgeous
picture for theme and flow.
Thanks for sharing...best wishes, Ronni

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from meeshu
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superior work in a fairly difficult form. "teaming" with great rhymes.
love the feel of the ocean it coaxes. I don't want to come up for air.
thanx, robina......meeshu

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This poem is very well written and describes a beautiful scene and emotion. I felt at peace as I read this poem. You did a good job writing it. I'm sorry I missed it the first time around.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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That does sound like a sweet dream. I can easily imagine living that way, without any trouble. I'm not really familiar with this form of poetry, but I found it an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from William Ross
Exceptional
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very good on this, and congratulations on the win with this hard style to write. It's just wonderfully written. thanks for sharing this again. have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week. Thanks for the lovely six, much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
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Well done, what a super poem, with a very interesting rhyme scheme, and a mixture and textured narrative. Beautifully written, the interwoven story gives it an unusual "feel" to it. Well done, I see you wrote this sometime ago, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Eastern Weekend.
reply by royowen on 30-Mar-2018
    You too Ine,
reply by royowen on 30-Mar-2018
    You too Ine,
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha from Hawaii Robina 1978,
What a beautiful poem, you write about my lovely ocean so very well. I'm new to this style but I like it. Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Have a great second part of the week. I have not seen you for a long time. are you OK?
Comment from dragonpoet
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NIce poem about the life of a mermaid and the beauty of the sea above and below.

It seems like a hard form to write.

In your description of the rhyme scheme shouldn't it be ABA not ABC. It seems like you used only 2 rhymes not differnt ones as the rhyme scheme suggests.

Good luck in the contest and keep writing

Happy Holidays.

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine. I see what you mean.
reply by dragonpoet on 18-Dec-2014
reply by dragonpoet on 18-Dec-2014
    You're welcome.

    dragonpoet