Changing Rooms
The Sequel to 'Room Beside My Heart'26 total reviews
Comment from rchitwood
Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it very good flow and your words create strong emotions of love.Very well written and smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it very good flow and your words create strong emotions of love.Very well written and smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Hi Rita,
I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. I hope you find more of my portfolio equally pleasing.
cheers
Grant
Comment from debsjubilantpoetry
this is so beautiful. what a description of a love which cannot be contained. I love the font and background color. It's impeccably written. I would recommend it to someone else. debs
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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this is so beautiful. what a description of a love which cannot be contained. I love the font and background color. It's impeccably written. I would recommend it to someone else. debs
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hello Debs,
Glad you got enjoyment from it as I too enjoyed watching as it flowed from the pen I held! lol
cheers
Grant
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. There is very good imagery. True love has no key.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. There is very good imagery. True love has no key.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hey there mate!
Thanks for stopping by again for a read and chinwag!
I appreciate it.
cheers
Grant
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You're welcome, Grant. Charlie
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Awww such a beautiful, heartfelt, wish and beautiful poetica, my old friend. Always so good to read from your pen, your words and rhythm are always so uniquely you.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Awww such a beautiful, heartfelt, wish and beautiful poetica, my old friend. Always so good to read from your pen, your words and rhythm are always so uniquely you.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Howdy ho Jo to the Lo!
How you been you betrothed thing you?
I'm on my way to your post soon. Don't review here much as I become depressed at the quality as opposed to the ranking in relation to what is paying...
Love ya hon!!! #:~D
Grant
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi mrgrunty,
Love poems are difficult to write as so many have already been written. Having said that, I find this one to be fresh and imaginative. You word choices are expressive, the liquid flow lets the lines slide down the page with ease and the metaphor is well done. Excellent! chey
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hi mrgrunty,
Love poems are difficult to write as so many have already been written. Having said that, I find this one to be fresh and imaginative. You word choices are expressive, the liquid flow lets the lines slide down the page with ease and the metaphor is well done. Excellent! chey
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hey hey chey!
How are you,it's been aaaaaaaggges..
Glad you are still about.
cheers
Grant
Comment from peggles
What a lovely poem this is
It flowed extremely well
It was a pleasure to read
I enjoyed it very much
so well written
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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What a lovely poem this is
It flowed extremely well
It was a pleasure to read
I enjoyed it very much
so well written
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hello peggles,
I appreciate the read and review muchly!
cheers
Grant
Comment from TammyGail
What a beautiful poem this was
I enjoyed it much .. very well written
It flowed extremely well
It was a pleasure to read thanks for sharing it was a pleasure...
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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What a beautiful poem this was
I enjoyed it much .. very well written
It flowed extremely well
It was a pleasure to read thanks for sharing it was a pleasure...
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hiya Tammy,
Thanks for the great comments, I am glad you liked it.
cheers
Grant
Comment from percival86jack
The day will come, inside a room,
together we will stand.
And from that box, behind the locks,
my heart is what you land.
A true love poem... plain and simple! Well done, my Aussie friend! Cheers, Jack
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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The day will come, inside a room,
together we will stand.
And from that box, behind the locks,
my heart is what you land.
A true love poem... plain and simple! Well done, my Aussie friend! Cheers, Jack
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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I appreciate the review Jack,
thanks.
cheers
Grant
Comment from alexisleech
Strangely enough, I have just scrolled back up to see if there was an image because I was going to say that it doesn't really need one! I could immediately envisage the person with their heart locked in a box behind a closed door gradually letting the light of love in. This was endorsed by the curtains being drawn back which to me, was very symbolic. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Strangely enough, I have just scrolled back up to see if there was an image because I was going to say that it doesn't really need one! I could immediately envisage the person with their heart locked in a box behind a closed door gradually letting the light of love in. This was endorsed by the curtains being drawn back which to me, was very symbolic. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Thanks Alexis,
I truly appreciate the fantastic words and am glad you enjoyed it.
cheers
Grant
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very lovely poem, mrgrunty, and I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Your poem flows and rhymes well.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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This is a very lovely poem, mrgrunty, and I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Your poem flows and rhymes well.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate the review.
cheers
Grant
