Momma Sailed
Eight word poem33 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful tribute in your well written eight word poem. Eloquent and heartfelt with the emotion of a living child. Well done Tina.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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A beautiful tribute in your well written eight word poem. Eloquent and heartfelt with the emotion of a living child. Well done Tina.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Janet, for the complimentary review!
Tina
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
What a lovely and gentle leave taking poem, You managed to express a great deal in eight words. The picture that you chose continues the serene feeling.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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What a lovely and gentle leave taking poem, You managed to express a great deal in eight words. The picture that you chose continues the serene feeling.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I appreciate your review and input so much!
Tina
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:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am sorry for your loss and your Mother died so young Tina, some people are unlucky and their life is short, your words are gentle and full of grace, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I am sorry for your loss and your Mother died so young Tina, some people are unlucky and their life is short, your words are gentle and full of grace, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I like that you think it's grace-full. God's grace got me through!
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
For eight words this short poem says a lot. It captures both faith and sorrow in one short line. Sorry that you lost your momma so long ago and her life was cut short.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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For eight words this short poem says a lot. It captures both faith and sorrow in one short line. Sorry that you lost your momma so long ago and her life was cut short.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thanks for your review and kindness. I know she's happy where she's at:)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow. Sentiments for a loved one passed away, remembered not for a day, week, month or year but now it has been four decades. You must have been only a child. Very nice.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Wow. Sentiments for a loved one passed away, remembered not for a day, week, month or year but now it has been four decades. You must have been only a child. Very nice.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I was 18, too young to fully appreciate and know my mom. I appreciate her more with every day:)
Thanks, Tom for your thoughts!
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good 8 word poem. It sums up your feelings and love for your mum in a very poignant way. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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This is a very good 8 word poem. It sums up your feelings and love for your mum in a very poignant way. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Jen, for the review and good luck wishes!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Tina,
A beautiful gentle eight words to allow the wind within these sails.
I love the presentation and the composition of this poem.
And when I read your notes... how sad to lose your mother at such a young age. You must have been a baby?:) Or young, either way, far too young.
All the very best in this contest... and if sentiment and beauty has anything to do with it... you are a true contender!
With our thoughts we create...
trade winds of transition.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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Hi Tina,
A beautiful gentle eight words to allow the wind within these sails.
I love the presentation and the composition of this poem.
And when I read your notes... how sad to lose your mother at such a young age. You must have been a baby?:) Or young, either way, far too young.
All the very best in this contest... and if sentiment and beauty has anything to do with it... you are a true contender!
With our thoughts we create...
trade winds of transition.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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I was 18 when she left us, when our world shifted. God carried us through, like He does:) Thanks for your poetic review and thoughts on my little poem!
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Your love and zest for life is the perfect conductor for our Creator to see you through the toughest times... your beautiful smile tell me so.
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Our Creator needs conductors. I love that thought. To be used by Him is such an honor!
HE makes me smile:)
Tina
Comment from Wendy G
She died quite young then - that must have been a huge grief, as you remember her with much love. I like the delightful image of her sailing off gently to heaven, with her last breath propelling her there. best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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She died quite young then - that must have been a huge grief, as you remember her with much love. I like the delightful image of her sailing off gently to heaven, with her last breath propelling her there. best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2022
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You totally get my poem and that's so encouraging. I was just 18, almost 19, when she died suddenly. A huge grief, yes, but eventually I accepted and thanked God for His plan.I appreciate your thoughts as always:)
Comment from Regina Elliott
Peaceful and serene eight
word poem. Sounds like you
had a wonderful relationship
with your mother. You'll be
with her again someday.
My very best wishes for the
contest, this is a good
contender. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Peaceful and serene eight
word poem. Sounds like you
had a wonderful relationship
with your mother. You'll be
with her again someday.
My very best wishes for the
contest, this is a good
contender. Blessings ~
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much, Regina for your kind words. Yes, I will see her again :) I appreciate your sentiment.
Tina
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, sad, clear, descriptive and creative.
Thank you so much for the author's notes - beautiful words written.
The poem is a lovely tribute to your Momma. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is soothing and peaceful.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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The author's words are heartfelt, sad, clear, descriptive and creative.
Thank you so much for the author's notes - beautiful words written.
The poem is a lovely tribute to your Momma. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is soothing and peaceful.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Aw, thanks Harmony!
