In Dew's Time...
One Line Poem51 total reviews
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Clever line of poetry in the middle of the two images which it links up. I adore roses and rose is one of my favourite perfumes. I enjoyed reading this work very much, Giddy
Clever line of poetry in the middle of the two images which it links up. I adore roses and rose is one of my favourite perfumes. I enjoyed reading this work very much, Giddy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Diane,
What a lovely one line poem. I loved the flowers. Are the roses from your garden or elsewhere? It's amazing how so few words can express so much. As always, well done. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Hello Diane,
What a lovely one line poem. I loved the flowers. Are the roses from your garden or elsewhere? It's amazing how so few words can express so much. As always, well done. Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
Comment from Kamrynn June
Dear Mrs. KT,
Once again, you have impressed me with your love of nature and poetry. Are these roses from your garden? They are so beautiful! Very lovely and short piece. Always look forward to these!
-K
Dear Mrs. KT,
Once again, you have impressed me with your love of nature and poetry. Are these roses from your garden? They are so beautiful! Very lovely and short piece. Always look forward to these!
-K
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The words of your one-line poem are well-chosen, to present a lovely view of spring, nature at work. Clever variation on the expression "in due time." Great artwork
The words of your one-line poem are well-chosen, to present a lovely view of spring, nature at work. Clever variation on the expression "in due time." Great artwork
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
This is a stunning one line poem! You've made such perfect use of the fact that you have only line to work with.
You've even got a nice rhyme in the word "renders" and "splendor" although I half expected to see the the word splendors.
This is the one to beat! Good luck!
Bookcasing this one for further study.
Be well,
Katiemae Dead
This is a stunning one line poem! You've made such perfect use of the fact that you have only line to work with.
You've even got a nice rhyme in the word "renders" and "splendor" although I half expected to see the the word splendors.
This is the one to beat! Good luck!
Bookcasing this one for further study.
Be well,
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from l.raven
Hi Diane, Oh how roses love water...love the feel of
dew in the morning...God is sooooo good to us...in all He
gives us...
I love your beautiful poem my sweet friend...and love your
stunning pictures...so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Hi Diane, Oh how roses love water...love the feel of
dew in the morning...God is sooooo good to us...in all He
gives us...
I love your beautiful poem my sweet friend...and love your
stunning pictures...so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written one line poem. What a lovely overall presentation. I love your photo compliments your words so well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
This is a beautifully written one line poem. What a lovely overall presentation. I love your photo compliments your words so well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Hello Joanne!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
Such a small offering, but I surely enjoyed penning it as I thought about the beauty and passing of the seasons...
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The images are beautiful. The sentence is telling how exquisites the roses are before they bud and after they are done budding and blossoming.
There is always a warm feeling when you see beautiful flowers.
The images are beautiful. The sentence is telling how exquisites the roses are before they bud and after they are done budding and blossoming.
There is always a warm feeling when you see beautiful flowers.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
With just one line, this poem is skillfully composed, playing on words. In due time seasons change. Natural outdoor growth changes in "dew's" time. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly with the imagery of your poetry.
With just one line, this poem is skillfully composed, playing on words. In due time seasons change. Natural outdoor growth changes in "dew's" time. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly with the imagery of your poetry.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
Hey Diane
I like
the metaphor and pun in this poem. It is so true.
You chose great artwork to illustrate your poem
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Hey Diane
I like
the metaphor and pun in this poem. It is so true.
You chose great artwork to illustrate your poem
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021