Reviews from

I Love a Pick-a-nick

Bring on Summer

63 total reviews 
Comment from palmart
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Your work has definitively find the invisible thread that connect those words with a great, nice and wonderful story. You received a well-deserved recognition in all what a FanStory writer could expect: Recognition, 1st prize and All-time Best. What else? You are definitively a Best Seller. Thanks for sharing your poetry!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
reply by palmart on 29-Mar-2021
    You´re very welcome, Earl Corp!

    My okeasure!

    Have a Perfect Easter Season!!
Comment from Carla M Horne
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I'm glad you explained about Yogi Bear. I had forgotten that. It's a good poem with all the words used. Great way to use couplets. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from rhonnie69
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

HELLO EARL: I thank you for sharing. You are appreciated. This posting is me. By now you know that I'm a children's writer. Cartoons are among my main tools. I like the way you were able to adhere to the writing prompt, while taking me to the pick-a-nick, ushering me through the pick-a-nick, and getting me home. Good work, Earl. God bless you, my friend. cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much Rhonnie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello Earl,
Congratulations on the win!
You've used the words well,
I live a picnic too, and good old summer time
at the outdoor barbecue.
I guess I'm one of those nerds,
since I like hawks, eagles and falcon.
Great art work to match.
Best wishes.
Robert




 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much Robert. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

So much colour and fun, I want to go on that picnic too. A very enjoyable read and the burgers look delicious. I just hope there were no ants. Or what ever the insect de jour is.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
reply by Bluesatinbutterfly on 29-Mar-2021
    It was my pleasure.
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Lovely, lovely, lovely! How lovely! You've written very well. Many thanks for the smiles showered on my face which came from reading this piece. I particularly like the rhymes. Beautiful. My best wishes, today and always.

Blessings and good health!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from oliver818
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Nice poem, I can really hear Yogi beats voice behind it and with that classic yogi bear laugh. Thanks for sharing this and well done on winning the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Talia Shilling Rabin
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is fantastic! You did a great job using all of the words. The poem flowed smoothly, and it didn't even seem like you were trying to incorporate and specific words. Good job!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Cromwell Estes
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I love the simplicity and consistency of this poem. It is very well written, and I can see why it has won a contest and one of the all time best awards. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Rebel Jim
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You got all those STARS of cartoons...
But where's Bugs and his crew?!
Oh how I miss the Saturday morning cartoons!
The Jetsons and the Flintstones and Johnny Quest....
You did GOOD!!.....

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much for the six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.