Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for joining in the Renga book, Pam! You always do such a great job with nature themes! Love that picture and yes, hearing the birds sing reminds us that there is a natural world so much bigger than our own.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Helen. I appreciate your compliment about my nature themes, my favorite topic. I'm glad you liked the picture and the singing birds and poem. Have a great day!

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Birds Sing Tuneful Songs", is an extremely well-written, and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Duchess. I appreciate your comments and am glad you enjoyed the poem.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 23-Nov-2020

Pam,
as always, you're very welcome.
God bless you, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020

Thanks, Duchess, you do the same. Have a good week, too!

Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

Hello Pam,
You've written a marvelous haiku for Gypsy's book
with excellent imagery of nature seen on your walk,
and precise grammatical connection in the first two lines.
The satori line is a perfect reflective thought,
much needed in these chaotic times.
Exactly as the old masters did.
Great choice of art work to match.
Very well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Robert. I appreciate all of your comments about this haiku with nature imagery and the satori line being a good reflective thought for these times. I am honored to be thought of along with old masters, too. I am glad you also liked the artwork.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is a lovely follow-up poem with a lovely picture which sets the stage for your words. I love birds and birdsong. Your poem follows the rules for the 5/7/5 format perfectly and is very well done.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, roof35. I appreciate your comments about the poem, picture, and the birds and their songs. I am glad you enjoy them, too.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Lucky you to live near a lake and such colorful birds--even a hummingbird! I enjoyed your 5-7-5 and the beautiful creatures plus their songs. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Joan. I appreciate your comments about the birds and their songs, as well as being on a lake. It is a peaceful community.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Being a fellow bird-lover I appreciate your Renga contribution very much. The peaceful existence which might seem contrary to calm in fact works in concert together because the birds, sun and lake all "listen" to each other.

Excellent contribution and a fine read today, Pam. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Gloria. I appreciate your comments about the poem and peaceful existence, and how nature works together. We are fortunate to live in a very peaceful area here. I am glad you enjoyed this.🐦🦜🦅

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely piece about nature's power to engender wonder and peace--the reason I love my daily walks!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Janice. I appreciate your comments about the poem, the wonder and peace in nature, and daily walks, too.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Exceptional

Birds Sing Tuneful Songs
by Pam (respa)

Hello, Pam,

Many haiku masters are inspired for their haiku while going for a walk... it's a form of zen practice. Your 5/7/5 is perfect for our renga book. Thank you for adding the author notes and most of all for adding your beautiful haiku.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Gypsy. It means a lot. I appreciate your comments about being inspired by a walk, the haiku, and the notes, too.

Comment from Ann Market

Excellent

This lovely poem has a peaceful, almost zen-like essence that I fully enjoyed! You painted a beautiful picture with so few words; this is a wonderful poem!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Ann. I appreciate your comments about the peaceful poem, a zen-like essence, and painting a word picture, too.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done Pam, this is a marvellous addition to and in this renga initiative of Gypsies to and on this site is a marvellous innovation, well done, my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Roy. I appreciate your comments about the poem and Gypsy's book, too. It is a great initiative on her part.

reply by royowen on 21-Nov-2020

It is indeed