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I was born to.....

See the sparkle in the dew.

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Comment from humpwhistle
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I am happy for you, Roy. That you feel such love and contentment. To be set apart by God is a grand aspiration.
But it also suggests conflict. Wars are waged by those who claim they are set apart by God. I know you mean something different, Roy, but the rhetoric is flammable. Those who claim to be favored by God are often the worst offenders of His commandments.

Again, I know you mean something else. But your words can be misconstrued.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    I sincerely hope that's not what you think of me, Lee, The bible is quite clear that one is set apart by God to only have freedom to love, not judge, not to be an executioner, or be coerced. And to my knowledge no major war in the last several centuries has been caused because of Christendom, show me one if there is other ideologies have, and yet we have to wear the constant accusations! My blessings, Roy.
reply by humpwhistle on 07-Jul-2015
    No, Roy, of course I don't see you in that way. Religions and churches muddy the waters when they set themselves apart--in God's eyes. The bloody wars between the Catholics and the Protestants in Northern Ireland demonstrate the way ideology gets perverted. It's the same with the current Islamic wars. Some Muslims think Allah has set them apart--that they're better than the 'infidels'. Christians and Jews are the infidels.

    Please don't take this personally, Roy. But when one group of people claims to be set apart--favored--by God, conflict always follows.

    I respect and mire you, Roy. I'm only concerned about the 'set apart' line. All too often, those are interpreted as fighting words. I know that's not your intention. Lee
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    I wasn't offended, I just used a scriptural term that Christ Himself used, and those that believe, anyone can call themselves what they will, but whether they are or not is problematical, I consider you a very intelligent, discerning man, so I'm not disputing, just explaining the use! I agree with you, it's not what we say that counts but rather what we do. I am the same as you! With respect, Lee, blessings, Roy.
Comment from GE Parson
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Bro. Roy,
Very good testimony of why God bought you into this world.
Especially to bring light and hope to those wondering about in the darkness of this world.

Just keep on bing that light o God.

Your admiering Brother in Christ,
Jerry

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you Dear Jerry, for your constant support, your encouragement and uplifting comments, being an ever special friend, and for the exceptional rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from robina1978
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. It is written in true rhyming couplets. A love poem about you and the Lord. Well done to enter this for the love contest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you Ine, for this most positive review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from scongrove
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Another beautiful work of art Roy! :) I always look forward when you post something new. Reading your poems brightens my day. Your words always have such true meanings to them. We are lucky to get to read them.

The picture you posted is really breathtaking. Great choice! :)
Shana :)

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you Shana, for your constant support, your encouragement and uplifting comments, and exceptional rating, and friendship, blessings, Roy.
reply by scongrove on 07-Jul-2015
    You're welcome :)
Comment from cmowen87
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I loved your flow and rhyme scheme that so easily let the reader glide Lind by line. Your sweet message was proclaimed throughout your poem. Great job

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you, for this most positive review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ben Colder
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Excellent. We were. We were born free to walk in the light or stumble in darkness. I never knew I was blind and naked util the light came. Good poem, Bro. Hope you win.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you brother Ben, for your constant support, your encouragement and uplifting comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Joy Graham
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This is very nice. It's easy to forget that God gifted us with life and we should appreciate it. We are blessed with all the beauty around us and we should show appreciation for it. Thank you for reminding me.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you Joy, for this most positive review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ekim777
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Having been so struck by your very prominent picture (To me, it illustrates the very miracle of nature) how can we deny your reason to be? Beautifully written, for a while we are introduced the the world through the eyes of the poet. It is all craftily written it leaves little more to be said. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you, for this most positive review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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This is beautiful, Roy. Superb topic, rhyme, meter... you have it all right here. It's a strong entry, and I can tell you put time and thought into it. Could be a winner! :)

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you Phyllis, for this most positive review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Hello good poet Roy
Another wonderfully poetic testimony to the purpose God has for all of us, also with a romantic leaning, nice work. Loyd

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you Loyd, for this most positive review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy.
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 07-Jul-2015
    My pleasure, Loyd