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Breathe In

Keeping us Alive

8 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We take the air we breathe for granted and without it we would cease to exist, this is a tribute to the air that we cannot see but it is life saving, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020


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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. We all need air :)

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2020


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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Yes, as the Bible points out, the air goes where it pleases. We can't tell precisely from where it comes or predict exactly where it will go. I gave a 4 because "where" is off-rhyme.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Comment from Anne-Marie brison
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Dear author,


Wow!!!; What an excellent piece of work!!!!!! Thanks sooo much for sharing this with Fanstory!!!!!! Awesome job!!! Keep writing!!!!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Good job with the syllable count per line and the end rhymes. I like the image you paired with your words, too. You give readers something to think about in a good way.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Comment from kahpot
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Wonderful, yes it is something for us all to wonder about "where" great artwork for these words, love the rhyme words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Comment from Bill Schott
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This 1-6-1, Breathe In, has the right set up and sees air as that THING which decides our future just by being here. Thank you air.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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Comment from Mia Twysted
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I like this piece for it ask a question I have ask myself from time to time. Where is the air. Why can't we see it? That which we need to continue on is invisible to us.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2020


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