Gone Away
Writers Block entry10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This writer's block 5-7-5, Gone Away, has the proper formatting and finds that one has allowed the help too much time off.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
This writer's block 5-7-5, Gone Away, has the proper formatting and finds that one has allowed the help too much time off.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review Bill. Sometimes I think it really has taken a lot of time off.
Geoff
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent entry for the writer's block 5-7-5 contest. It is extremely witty, and lighthearted, eventhough the subject is serious and depressing (if only to writers).
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
This is an excellent entry for the writer's block 5-7-5 contest. It is extremely witty, and lighthearted, eventhough the subject is serious and depressing (if only to writers).
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
I like your entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's funny. I like the presentation too. Good syllable count. Good luck.
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
Hello my friend
I like your entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. It's funny. I like the presentation too. Good syllable count. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Puzzle
hahahaha i LOVE THIS!!! Great job with the rhyme and it making sense. Yea i'm in a bit of a funk right now myself. lol. Good luck in the contest! This is a great contender!
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
hahahaha i LOVE THIS!!! Great job with the rhyme and it making sense. Yea i'm in a bit of a funk right now myself. lol. Good luck in the contest! This is a great contender!
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Hope your inspiration returns from its vacation soon.
Comment from Ben Colder
Watch a a doucmenation about wild life, som times it will bring back you mind set. Worth a try. Best to you. We all get it. Best to you in the contest if there is one.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
Watch a a doucmenation about wild life, som times it will bring back you mind set. Worth a try. Best to you. We all get it. Best to you in the contest if there is one.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from R. Hiland
This was a fun poetry prompt. Lots of good things there, your piece among them. I think your muse has returned. Good luck in the contest. .,.........
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
This was a fun poetry prompt. Lots of good things there, your piece among them. I think your muse has returned. Good luck in the contest. .,.........
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from victor 66
Just a theory, I think writer's block is just when you get tired and yet still wanna write something that you consider good. I find if I just quit for a little while, my brain relaxes and something comes along in my mind that's halfway good, which in my case is good enough. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
Just a theory, I think writer's block is just when you get tired and yet still wanna write something that you consider good. I find if I just quit for a little while, my brain relaxes and something comes along in my mind that's halfway good, which in my case is good enough. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. I agree with you re the writers block treatment, in theory at least.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A writer's block...yes, for writers and poets that can be a real frustration. Nicely found funny illustration and a good little poem. The inspiration went on holiday, call him back, you need it!
I liked it. Good entry.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
A writer's block...yes, for writers and poets that can be a real frustration. Nicely found funny illustration and a good little poem. The inspiration went on holiday, call him back, you need it!
I liked it. Good entry.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed
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welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, amazing entry for the contest and it deserves a six, but I have only five left, so sorry -
My inspiration
is on a long vacation
Please come back to me!!
Good luck with the contest and you got my vote.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
Wow, amazing entry for the contest and it deserves a six, but I have only five left, so sorry -
My inspiration
is on a long vacation
Please come back to me!!
Good luck with the contest and you got my vote.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your very positive review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is an excellent contest entry since it meets both the content and format requirements. The words are something many of us can relate to. The image is a nice complement
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
This poem is an excellent contest entry since it meets both the content and format requirements. The words are something many of us can relate to. The image is a nice complement
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.