Truth and Fantasy
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Wishes"Short stories
9 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
A very good story about a whining little girl who was spoiled. Finally she was taken away for good, probably to the delight of all those who had to please her. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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A very good story about a whining little girl who was spoiled. Finally she was taken away for good, probably to the delight of all those who had to please her. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much, Marilyn. I am pleased you enjoyed my flash fiction.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, now that had to be the most unique of the writings that I've read thus far, Trisha -- very cool!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing your imagination through your pen!! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Well, now that had to be the most unique of the writings that I've read thus far, Trisha -- very cool!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing your imagination through your pen!! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review, glad you liked it
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
What a gorgeous story! The spoiled brat had it coming. But maybe turning into a unicorn was too good for her.
Thanks so much for sharing. Most enjoyable.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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What a gorgeous story! The spoiled brat had it coming. But maybe turning into a unicorn was too good for her.
Thanks so much for sharing. Most enjoyable.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
feathered,
... but,
Very well told about a spoiled child that wanted everything but all made her unhappy. Till she was no longer heard. Reminds me of the story of crying wolf
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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feathered,
... but,
Very well told about a spoiled child that wanted everything but all made her unhappy. Till she was no longer heard. Reminds me of the story of crying wolf
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Oh yes, good memory, thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Be careful what you wish for you may get it. Old Cliché but approiate. 88888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888
Rikki:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Be careful what you wish for you may get it. Old Cliché but approiate. 88888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888
Rikki:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Exactly, Thanks so much for your kind review, Rikki.
Hugs, Trisha
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Exactly, Thanks so much for your kind review, Rikki.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
She sounds like a spoiled brat, always wanting more, who has finally been taught a lesson. I like that. Good presentation. A good entry for the club.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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She sounds like a spoiled brat, always wanting more, who has finally been taught a lesson. I like that. Good presentation. A good entry for the club.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again, Ms. Bucketlist. I guess the moral to this story would be to be careful what you wish for (you just might get it, though it's not guaranteed to be the way you want it). Good job and good luck with your club entry.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hello again, Ms. Bucketlist. I guess the moral to this story would be to be careful what you wish for (you just might get it, though it's not guaranteed to be the way you want it). Good job and good luck with your club entry.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You meet the Club Challenge nicely with a delightful unicorn story BUT it is only 99 words and should be 100. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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You meet the Club Challenge nicely with a delightful unicorn story BUT it is only 99 words and should be 100. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a neat flash fiction piece in response to Maria's challenge :)
I must get around to writing my response.
Just one thing I picked-up on, although I'm not sure if it applies to America English:
She demanded to have blond hair -- Spag? "Blond" is usually male. "Blonde" is female.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This is a neat flash fiction piece in response to Maria's challenge :)
I must get around to writing my response.
Just one thing I picked-up on, although I'm not sure if it applies to America English:
She demanded to have blond hair -- Spag? "Blond" is usually male. "Blonde" is female.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I?m honored for your review. I hadn?t given it a thought, but I changed ?blond? to ?blonde? Thanks for your positive feedback
Hugs, Trisha