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My Self Biograpy

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Comment from dovemarie
Exceptional
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Dear Ricky, I like your use of the word "cast": "cast images" and "decisions not yet cast." I also liked your rhyme, and I could just see the crystal clear waters. Did you lose your wife to suicide? I can't remember if she died or just left you. And I know all your poems will be in memory of your son. Dove

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 03-May-2019
    Thanks this was a very fine work I will admit I had fun with it especially the point where I decided to leave my body and let it wash up on the shore.
    Ricky
reply by dovemarie on 03-May-2019
    Dear Ricky, Keep up your fine work! Dove
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
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Dear Ricky, your finest yet. This is outstanding and I am vanquished of sixes! I live on the water with my love and I enjoyed the way you purge yourself of the sorrows of life as you gaze upon the sunset as you go in. I hope this no more than a thought...a sad ending to a poem. I do pray you will find love again. It's worth living for.
All my best,
Sally

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Once in a while after you create something you realize that you're onto something more then just a normal puncturing a reality.
    Ricky
Comment from Marjorie Burghdoff-Banks
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Casting images, love this line. Very descriptive, brings the reader into the story told here. I want to see the sunset over the bay after reading this. Lovely words, lovely flow, lovely poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 04-May-2019
    Thanks this means a lot.
    Dr.Ricky1024
reply by Marjorie Burghdoff-Banks on 04-May-2019
    You're welcome. I really liked this.