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Six Months of Marriage
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Comment from
BeasPeas
Hi Cass. A very well written chapter to your story. You have described such a wonderful bedroom scene with dialogue with Anne, the servant, the King and the King's manservant. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Super job. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
Dear Marilyn., Thank you for your review of the latest chapter of The Flanders Mare and the five stars. Now comes the next part. I have to write it and get it onto site. It won't take long once I get going, because I know what happens next, but the thing is to actually sit and do it!! Sorry, that's just my Virgoan procrastinatory impulse at work. I shall not fail you my dear. I should have it done by the end of next week. Cheers Cass
reply by BeasPeas on 26-Apr-2019
I understand completely. I am in the same boat with my BOT story which has been on hold all month due to NaPoWriMo poem a day. Will be looking for your next chapter. :) Marilyn
Comment from
Phyllis Stewart
Uh, oh. You said to read on, but there was nothing new for us to read? Should I come back later?
I have to make this "review" 150 words, but with nothng to say, that's not easy. :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
This isn't ready for posting yet. Sorry, but my fingers slipped between Preview and Disabled status. Anyway you haven't read chapter three yet, so hang in there darlin' It's coming!! cheers Cass
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