Lance's Lake Resort
Living life on the lake.4 total reviews
Comment from sfharper
Hi Lance, I like your sense of humor and appreciation for things you value. The picture matches the content. I agree with your point that poems should flow easily, this is somewhat stilted and could be improved with consonance, rhyme, repetition, or any of the tools of poetry. Good use of format, though.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Hi Lance, I like your sense of humor and appreciation for things you value. The picture matches the content. I agree with your point that poems should flow easily, this is somewhat stilted and could be improved with consonance, rhyme, repetition, or any of the tools of poetry. Good use of format, though.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thanks for your comments. Noted. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Oh, so pretty! Imagine waking up to this every morning... Very clever verse. You have a wonderful sense of humor. I will try to get to FB...could look at this picture all day, but would get no work done, LOL
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Oh, so pretty! Imagine waking up to this every morning... Very clever verse. You have a wonderful sense of humor. I will try to get to FB...could look at this picture all day, but would get no work done, LOL
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the review
Comment from susand3022
Hi Lance! Your Lake Resort looks lovely... I bet you get some nice fishing in there. :) My family has a "Lake Resort" too. I'm the third generation... and there are already two behind me! I do think I like mine a little better though... yours looks a little crowded to me... lol
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Hi Lance! Your Lake Resort looks lovely... I bet you get some nice fishing in there. :) My family has a "Lake Resort" too. I'm the third generation... and there are already two behind me! I do think I like mine a little better though... yours looks a little crowded to me... lol
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Well it's not a fishing camp for sure. A great home with pool, lots of decking and a great sunrise view. Sounds like you and I each live in the right place! Thanks for your review.
Comment from Randa Dayle
How nice you have a beautiful view! And I am very glad you know the management... Ha! Ha! Nice poem about how grateful you are! Thanks for sharing!! :):)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
How nice you have a beautiful view! And I am very glad you know the management... Ha! Ha! Nice poem about how grateful you are! Thanks for sharing!! :):)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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The owner and general manager is a great guy. LOL
You rated with a 4 which indicates a good poem that requires an adjustment. A 5 rating is a good poem not requiring adjustment. Can you share with me what adjustment you felt was needed?
Thank you.
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Just an error...sorry about that!
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Thanks
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If rated in error can you contact the site administrator to correct it? I'd appreciate it.