Fireworks Flowers
A 5-7-5 poem31 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Fireworks Flowers, looks good and describes well this capture of the flora on canvas and then into words. Fireworks is the image I see. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This 5-7-5, Fireworks Flowers, looks good and describes well this capture of the flora on canvas and then into words. Fireworks is the image I see. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you Bill for your wonderful review
Comment from Kathleen S.
Pretty picture and interesting poem. My mind wanders when I read it. I wonder what fireworks are going off somewhere in the distance... whether they are something someone can see with their natural eyes, or whether the fireworks are simply someone's emotions going off in their head privately... imagination sparks.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Pretty picture and interesting poem. My mind wanders when I read it. I wonder what fireworks are going off somewhere in the distance... whether they are something someone can see with their natural eyes, or whether the fireworks are simply someone's emotions going off in their head privately... imagination sparks.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Lovely words in your review, Kathleen. Thank you for it
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Lovely words in your review, Kathleen. Thank you for it
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO PAM: I like your work here because in a few words and a brilliant painting you have succeeded to do what you've endeavored to do. You've made your painting look like fireworks. I can feel your heat here. Thank you for sharing, Pam. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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HELLO PAM: I like your work here because in a few words and a brilliant painting you have succeeded to do what you've endeavored to do. You've made your painting look like fireworks. I can feel your heat here. Thank you for sharing, Pam. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you rhonnie69 for another lovely review
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Thank you rhonnie69 for another lovely review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a geat thought Pam, the think that flowers are fireworks, flashes of colour to spark a reaction in us and bring life to our gardens, very uplifting, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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What a geat thought Pam, the think that flowers are fireworks, flashes of colour to spark a reaction in us and bring life to our gardens, very uplifting, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Dolly for another lovely review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about the bush of flowers that remind of fireworks in the sky. The colorful petals that move in the breeze like streaks of fire exploding. Great illustration.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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A very well-written Tanka about the bush of flowers that remind of fireworks in the sky. The colorful petals that move in the breeze like streaks of fire exploding. Great illustration.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there, my friend, this is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. And you paint as well. They certainly do look like fireworks. Nicely done. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Hello there, my friend, this is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. And you paint as well. They certainly do look like fireworks. Nicely done. ~Kerry
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Kerry for your lovely review. Nice to see you tonight
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My pleasure:) Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from lyenochka
Nice flower painting, Pam! They look like asters - one of my favorite fall flowers. I like the poem's metaphorical portrayal of the flowers as fireworks with the shining centers.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Nice flower painting, Pam! They look like asters - one of my favorite fall flowers. I like the poem's metaphorical portrayal of the flowers as fireworks with the shining centers.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Hi Helen. I had not heard of asters. These are kinda daisy like. I will look up asters. Thank you for your lovely review Wow they are pretty. Not pastels. I just invented these.
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Asters are September birth flowers. The name comes for the word for "star" as it looks star-like with the thin radiating petals.
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the firework flowers. The picture you painted looked they were flowers of fireworks. Great job my friend. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Pam, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the firework flowers. The picture you painted looked they were flowers of fireworks. Great job my friend. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Teri for your wonderful review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Nice 5-7-5 poem. The painting makes a perfect companion for the poem. Yes. They have golden centers. I can see fireworks as the thin petals form a circlet of firecrackers. I can also see fireworks in the whole flowers as they look similar to the fireworks set off at displays, making fireworks flowers in the sky. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Nice 5-7-5 poem. The painting makes a perfect companion for the poem. Yes. They have golden centers. I can see fireworks as the thin petals form a circlet of firecrackers. I can also see fireworks in the whole flowers as they look similar to the fireworks set off at displays, making fireworks flowers in the sky. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you Jaye for your lovely review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and first impressions of your beautiful artwork are fireworks (great work) while these words add strength to the painting, another very well presented peice****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Excellent and first impressions of your beautiful artwork are fireworks (great work) while these words add strength to the painting, another very well presented peice****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you kahpot for another stellar review