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Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Male Aging"Eclectic style
6 total reviews
Comment from Popcorn69
I read this twice and laugh out loud both times. I like your author notes about spelling egotistical wrong on purpose, you definitely made your point. I like your online name of "Bucketlist", and I look forward to reading more of your writing. I like your wit in his poem. Your pacing and flow were easy to follow. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
I read this twice and laugh out loud both times. I like your author notes about spelling egotistical wrong on purpose, you definitely made your point. I like your online name of "Bucketlist", and I look forward to reading more of your writing. I like your wit in his poem. Your pacing and flow were easy to follow. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Welcome Popcorn! I really appreciated your review. The facts that MY poem TITilated you, and your review was complimentary both made my day.. I love ?play on words? humor
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem about males that also age and lose most of their good looks and body muscles that turn into fat, we are not alone ladies, the gentlemen suffer the same effects of gravity.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
A very well-written loop poem about males that also age and lose most of their good looks and body muscles that turn into fat, we are not alone ladies, the gentlemen suffer the same effects of gravity.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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It?s called equality haha! Thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisga
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is hilarious!! :) ;) It's almost the same thoughts that go through one's mind when you hear all those ads on TV and on the radio for the 'male enhancement' supplements and prescriptions -- are you kidding me? :) ;) And your spelling of 'egotesticle'? Priceless! :) ;) Yep, a banana cannot be substituted for a hammer no matter how much some would like it to be .... :) :)
This is a great employment of this style -- it is one that I have certainly not mastered or even fully see how you 'experts' manage it, but this is awesome! :) ;)
Thank you so very much for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
This is hilarious!! :) ;) It's almost the same thoughts that go through one's mind when you hear all those ads on TV and on the radio for the 'male enhancement' supplements and prescriptions -- are you kidding me? :) ;) And your spelling of 'egotesticle'? Priceless! :) ;) Yep, a banana cannot be substituted for a hammer no matter how much some would like it to be .... :) :)
This is a great employment of this style -- it is one that I have certainly not mastered or even fully see how you 'experts' manage it, but this is awesome! :) ;)
Thank you so very much for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2018
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Thanks very much for your amused review. I?m glad you enjoyed the read.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love the sentiments here Trisha, the third stanza, fourth line, you missed the word (apply) at the beginning to complete the loop, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
Love the sentiments here Trisha, the third stanza, fourth line, you missed the word (apply) at the beginning to complete the loop, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks for being so astute!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I beg to differ. This is definitely fun, but also very honest and moving. A sincere account of the aging male in reliving his glory days. Wonderful photo to boot!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
I beg to differ. This is definitely fun, but also very honest and moving. A sincere account of the aging male in reliving his glory days. Wonderful photo to boot!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks Shauna, I appreciate your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from phil nelson
Ha! This was a bit of fun, and as an aging male, a little pointed too! Well done --the picture is perfect --good luck in the contest
All the best
Phil
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
Ha! This was a bit of fun, and as an aging male, a little pointed too! Well done --the picture is perfect --good luck in the contest
All the best
Phil
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you Phil for your positive review and good luck wish.
Hugs, Trisha