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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Wonders of Nature"Eclectic style
9 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
A lovely description of a great many aspects of nature seen from all sides. Words woven in to a great picture presentation, making even more of an impact.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
A lovely description of a great many aspects of nature seen from all sides. Words woven in to a great picture presentation, making even more of an impact.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thanks very much , I appprecite your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful write filled with the sentiments of nature and how we need to look afte our planet so that it will give us joy for many years to come, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
A wonderful write filled with the sentiments of nature and how we need to look afte our planet so that it will give us joy for many years to come, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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I?m glad you enjoyed my free verse, thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Robbie Yates
Lovely poem, Bucketlist. I love how you talk about nature mirroring our living ways... and then the many craftspeople and artists who mirror nature. Beautiful choice of words, and lovely formatting.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
Lovely poem, Bucketlist. I love how you talk about nature mirroring our living ways... and then the many craftspeople and artists who mirror nature. Beautiful choice of words, and lovely formatting.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Robbie much appreciated
Enjoy your week
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells wonders of Nature, how God's artists share the natural wealth, nature's wonders are sullies for all we need, we need to use all rightly and maintain balance and beauty goes longer; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
This tells wonders of Nature, how God's artists share the natural wealth, nature's wonders are sullies for all we need, we need to use all rightly and maintain balance and beauty goes longer; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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We take all these wonders for granted, thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, I don't think you could pick a better subject than 'nature'. It is something we are all dependent on and that makes this work of interest to all of us. Lovely imagery and observations throughout, but this verse really resonated:
Microscopic life which helps or hinders
Ocean life which feeds us, yet vast
And yet to be fully explored
Lush forests which become homes
Brightly colored birds which sing
The sky, it's celestial moon, and stars
Nothing to fix and thanks for sharing your poetry, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
Hello, I don't think you could pick a better subject than 'nature'. It is something we are all dependent on and that makes this work of interest to all of us. Lovely imagery and observations throughout, but this verse really resonated:
Microscopic life which helps or hinders
Ocean life which feeds us, yet vast
And yet to be fully explored
Lush forests which become homes
Brightly colored birds which sing
The sky, it's celestial moon, and stars
Nothing to fix and thanks for sharing your poetry, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Ana, cheers for your support. Actually, see my notes for credit for subject choice,. I?m delighted you continue to enjoy my penning. Your review was gratefully received
Hugs, Trisha
Enjoy your week.
Comment from Michael Steinert
I really like this piece. It does a great job showing the importance of all life and the cyclical nature of the world. Everything plays a part. This also was a very smooth read even in the free verse format. God Bless
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
I really like this piece. It does a great job showing the importance of all life and the cyclical nature of the world. Everything plays a part. This also was a very smooth read even in the free verse format. God Bless
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Michael, I?m so pleased you get some enjoyment from my poetry. Thank you for a very complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Have a great week, God Bless you too
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist
like the way you used your words in free verse format about the Wonders of Nature and why some of us don't as you said-
Will last longer for us all when we start to respect and start to care to keep the wonders of nature keep going.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
Hello Bucketlist
like the way you used your words in free verse format about the Wonders of Nature and why some of us don't as you said-
Will last longer for us all when we start to respect and start to care to keep the wonders of nature keep going.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Yes, big dream I think. I like freestyle because there?s no sylllable count, nor rhyme and meter to stress over. I?m glad you enjoyed the poem, and I thank you for a kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome Buckelist
Gert
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This is delightful, inspiring and educational poetry! God's creation in full view in the author's eye, its beauty and abundance pouring out... Like a painting, the poem has many shades and hues.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
This is delightful, inspiring and educational poetry! God's creation in full view in the author's eye, its beauty and abundance pouring out... Like a painting, the poem has many shades and hues.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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What a lovely way of expressing enjoyment. ?Shades and hues? , and thank you so much for your compliments. Donka
Hugs, Trisha
Have a great week
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a very nice poem. Your stanzas flowed smoothly, each one telling it's very important part of your story. It's a great reminder of the beauty of nature and how delicate it is.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
This is a very nice poem. Your stanzas flowed smoothly, each one telling it's very important part of your story. It's a great reminder of the beauty of nature and how delicate it is.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, I?m glad you enjoyed reading it
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome.