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Hate is such a little word35 total reviews
Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas
Dear Kahpot,
Your poem worked wonders on a well-known phrase.
Having the 'HATE' reduced to just 'hate' in last line
was most effective. Congratulations on your win!
Warmest wishes,
Deirdre Anne
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
Dear Kahpot,
Your poem worked wonders on a well-known phrase.
Having the 'HATE' reduced to just 'hate' in last line
was most effective. Congratulations on your win!
Warmest wishes,
Deirdre Anne
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and I am honored****kahpot
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. Congrats. Great formatting where Love over powers hate as displayed by the caps in the first three lines and small case in the last. Such a powerful message conveyed in seven words.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
Excellent. Congrats. Great formatting where Love over powers hate as displayed by the caps in the first three lines and small case in the last. Such a powerful message conveyed in seven words.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review*****kahpot
Comment from Hitcher
LOVE
HAS THE POWER
TO CONQUER
hate
Yes it does, has and will continue to do so.
Good luck with this one friend, hopefully you will get your first win !!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
LOVE
HAS THE POWER
TO CONQUER
hate
Yes it does, has and will continue to do so.
Good luck with this one friend, hopefully you will get your first win !!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Swampfox1
This is a very good entry. The poem works very well, I have heard the saying before but it is put together very nicely in your poem. All I can say is thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
This is a very good entry. The poem works very well, I have heard the saying before but it is put together very nicely in your poem. All I can say is thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
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you're welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an good entry for the 'My First Win' writing prompt.
Your message of the power of love is clear.
Well done and good luck.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
I think this is an good entry for the 'My First Win' writing prompt.
Your message of the power of love is clear.
Well done and good luck.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from godlucifer
a special kinda love takes a special kinda hate. one's must hate for one to conquer love. the kinda hate is the kinda love for all eternal to conquer. your poem had a powerful message and it read well. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
a special kinda love takes a special kinda hate. one's must hate for one to conquer love. the kinda hate is the kinda love for all eternal to conquer. your poem had a powerful message and it read well. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Madison Nicole
Love does have the power to conquer hate! Over the hatred that is spreading around in the world, a breath of a simple loving word is sometimes all that is needed.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
Love does have the power to conquer hate! Over the hatred that is spreading around in the world, a breath of a simple loving word is sometimes all that is needed.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from kiwijenny
Love indeed has the power to overcome hate...yay
Thanks for this antonym poem. I'm learning so much ontheis site
Well penned/...great art piece too
God bless
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
Love indeed has the power to overcome hate...yay
Thanks for this antonym poem. I'm learning so much ontheis site
Well penned/...great art piece too
God bless
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from Heather Knight
I agree with what you say in your poem. It seems so easy, but then again, why is there still so much hate all around?
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
I agree with what you say in your poem. It seems so easy, but then again, why is there still so much hate all around?
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks
Comment from rjuselius
this is a powerful sentiment dear anonymous! and so very true. hate can only grow resentment and revenge. love grows free and brings you back from the dark side.
thanks for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a hearty squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
this is a powerful sentiment dear anonymous! and so very true. hate can only grow resentment and revenge. love grows free and brings you back from the dark side.
thanks for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a hearty squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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many thanks