Busybody Blues
Kyrielle Poetry11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, Busybody Blues, has the right format and suggests, humorously, I guess, that a busybody would ever second guess butting in and ruining someone's life. That's their life's work. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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This kyrielle, Busybody Blues, has the right format and suggests, humorously, I guess, that a busybody would ever second guess butting in and ruining someone's life. That's their life's work. Nice poem.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Where Author I do love this I love the rhyme I love the Rhythm I love the poem and I do have a question what if you were wrong? hmmmmm
Either way thank you for sharing I've been very very entertained by your p o e m
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Where Author I do love this I love the rhyme I love the Rhythm I love the poem and I do have a question what if you were wrong? hmmmmm
Either way thank you for sharing I've been very very entertained by your p o e m
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Haha. Thanks so much Mary. I appreciate it.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Angela Post
I thought your kyrielle was fun to read and the art work fits it well.
I like the repetitive line, "but, really, what if I was wrong?" It is creative.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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I thought your kyrielle was fun to read and the art work fits it well.
I like the repetitive line, "but, really, what if I was wrong?" It is creative.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle. We sometimes see things that we thought to be something sinister but we may be wrong and it is not our business to tell others what we see and can't proof.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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A very well-written Kyrielle. We sometimes see things that we thought to be something sinister but we may be wrong and it is not our business to tell others what we see and can't proof.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your comments and review. I appreciate it!
Comment from karenina
First, let me say I am enjoying newly creative twists on the Kyrielle that 99 percent of the time appears as yet a mother livers lament! The humor here is fresh, the pace pleasant, the chosen image tailor made! I vote fun! Original! A real kick!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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First, let me say I am enjoying newly creative twists on the Kyrielle that 99 percent of the time appears as yet a mother livers lament! The humor here is fresh, the pace pleasant, the chosen image tailor made! I vote fun! Original! A real kick!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Hahaha. Thanks so much Karenina. Appreciate it.
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My Pleasure! Happy Easter!---Karenina
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Well, this one seems to fit the requirements to a 't'. All syllables present and accounted for. Perhaps hasty digit flicking, perhaps not? Who knows...
Nice one
GMG
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Hi there,
Well, this one seems to fit the requirements to a 't'. All syllables present and accounted for. Perhaps hasty digit flicking, perhaps not? Who knows...
Nice one
GMG
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Haha. Thanks so much G.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yep gossip can break hearts and destroy relationships and on-lookers decide the truth when the reverse is often the case, a wise and resonating poem, great words and artwork too, good luck with the contest, you nailed this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Yep gossip can break hearts and destroy relationships and on-lookers decide the truth when the reverse is often the case, a wise and resonating poem, great words and artwork too, good luck with the contest, you nailed this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much Dolly!
Comment from pome lover
a very good kyrielle - the last line making a good point
which she ignores.
Cleverly written and perfect accompanying picture.
good job.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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a very good kyrielle - the last line making a good point
which she ignores.
Cleverly written and perfect accompanying picture.
good job.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Write a Kyrielle' writing prompt.
Your verse describes the busy life of the busy body.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Write a Kyrielle' writing prompt.
Your verse describes the busy life of the busy body.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Oh! What a great topic and fun photo to choose for this contest. I loved your rhyming pattern and it appears that you have done the kyrielle style proud. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Oh! What a great topic and fun photo to choose for this contest. I loved your rhyming pattern and it appears that you have done the kyrielle style proud. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much. I appreciate it!