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Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Whispering Passages"A Collection of My best works.
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, Ricky: This is another peaceful but loving poem about your loss. I love the colors that you have chosen for this post. That dark color reminds of the darkness that you constantly feel and live in about this. The gorgeous light green reminds me of the hope that you have in seeing him again. Stay strong, my friend. Your day will come when you will welcome him back. Keep holding on to your hope in all of the promises of God. Much love...
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Good morning again, Ricky: This is another peaceful but loving poem about your loss. I love the colors that you have chosen for this post. That dark color reminds of the darkness that you constantly feel and live in about this. The gorgeous light green reminds me of the hope that you have in seeing him again. Stay strong, my friend. Your day will come when you will welcome him back. Keep holding on to your hope in all of the promises of God. Much love...
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today.
Comment from MaryAnnie
A perfect, insightful ending... Anyone who knows loss....especially the old kind, the hard kind, of loss, will understand what I find to be the most inspiring line of this work...that leads to the last word. Again.
Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed. MaryAnnie
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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A perfect, insightful ending... Anyone who knows loss....especially the old kind, the hard kind, of loss, will understand what I find to be the most inspiring line of this work...that leads to the last word. Again.
Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed. MaryAnnie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
We think and we remember and the times get easier in the memories , but thank God, they never go away. for I don't want to ever forget
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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We think and we remember and the times get easier in the memories , but thank God, they never go away. for I don't want to ever forget
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Yes, my dear, but...
"What is Life?"
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Dawn Munro
Aww, Rick this is excruciatingly sad, my friend. It's beautifully written. I guess the sorrows mount as we grow older, too, don't they? I'll be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers. I hope you find comfort.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Aww, Rick this is excruciatingly sad, my friend. It's beautifully written. I guess the sorrows mount as we grow older, too, don't they? I'll be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers. I hope you find comfort.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I'm glad you enjoyed the sad my dear darling thanks dr. Ricky 1024
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Solrac1
Proverbs 23:29 (KJV) Who hath woe? who hath sorrow? who hath contentions? who hath babbling? who hath wounds without cause? who hath redness of eyes?
Ps 30-29
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Proverbs 23:29 (KJV) Who hath woe? who hath sorrow? who hath contentions? who hath babbling? who hath wounds without cause? who hath redness of eyes?
Ps 30-29
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Thoughts of a bereaved father about the life and following death of his son, now son speaks about his living in heaven; as father prays to reunite; thanks for sharing this with us, well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thoughts of a bereaved father about the life and following death of his son, now son speaks about his living in heaven; as father prays to reunite; thanks for sharing this with us, well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written, but sad poem you have penned about your son that is no longer with you. You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. May God bless you and comfort you my friend! Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written, but sad poem you have penned about your son that is no longer with you. You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. May God bless you and comfort you my friend! Teri
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thanks Terry glad you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed writing it talk to Ricky 1024
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Vickie Mitchell
I enjoyed this piece and can relate during the passing of siblings and family who we find difficult to let go. Thank God for a relationship with Him that allows us the freedom to grieve, to want, to wait and to restore. Good luck and blessings
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed this piece and can relate during the passing of siblings and family who we find difficult to let go. Thank God for a relationship with Him that allows us the freedom to grieve, to want, to wait and to restore. Good luck and blessings
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thanks Vicky for your time and reviewing this piece dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Badger_29
I read this twice and I would have 6 stars because of the emotional content because of your use of spacing and quotation marks. It speaks of sweet memories of melancholy and sadness of time spent here with other living ones, there's also speaks of the joy of the afterlife Andre Union with our loved ones. Thank you very much for honoring our Heavenly Father and Jesus Christ.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I read this twice and I would have 6 stars because of the emotional content because of your use of spacing and quotation marks. It speaks of sweet memories of melancholy and sadness of time spent here with other living ones, there's also speaks of the joy of the afterlife Andre Union with our loved ones. Thank you very much for honoring our Heavenly Father and Jesus Christ.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I've been on this site now for over 6 years every one of my poems I always think Tom and Jesus and Heavenly Father you're the first person to ever mention that thanks for that dr. Ricky 1024