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My Self Biograpy
2 total reviews
Comment from
dragonpoet
The beginning is heartfelt sorrow of losing all family. It almost seems that speacker is suicidal.
I feel the end of the poem lessens the impact of the beginning except for the taking away Jay's hope of a better life than you had.
At the end of the poem beibg should be being.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
Thanks Dragon and keep firing...
Ricky
1024.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
Thanks ever so much for enjoying this and stopping by...
Ricky
1024.
Comment from
Cynthia1
Sad and compelling- yet free and breezy with the rhythm and song. I like this. I did notice one thing that you might want to correct. Your line that reads " I refuse to life forever"...I think it should be, I refuse to
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
Cynthia, you are an Angel that God sent to help us withered poets.
Ricky
1024.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
Thanks Cynthia for your kind comments and review.
Ricky 1024.
reply by Cynthia1 on 03-Sep-2016
You are so welcome.
Cynthia1
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