Christine's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 " Trinet: Summer Delights"Poems /stories on Fanstory
8 total reviews
Comment from Sambangi
It's a nice description of summer in simple words. From sun shining to summer delights, it came out very well. Excellent artwork too. Wish you all the best at voting booth
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
It's a nice description of summer in simple words. From sun shining to summer delights, it came out very well. Excellent artwork too. Wish you all the best at voting booth
Comment Written 07-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Thank you Sambangi for reading and reviewing my entry for the contest . Summer is my favourite time of year and hence I had fun having a go at writing this style, A big cheers to you for your lovely words Cheers
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You are welcome my friend
Comment from l.raven
all the wonderful things about Summer...fun in the sun...cook outs, and wonderful days a t the beach...so very well written...and I love your picture ...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
all the wonderful things about Summer...fun in the sun...cook outs, and wonderful days a t the beach...so very well written...and I love your picture ...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Ho Linda , yes I love summer and it truly warms my bones LOL thanks for reading my triolet and I had funning having a go at this style Cheers
Comment from Bill Schott
This trinet poem, Summer Delights, is so far off my radar that I would have to stand down in the furnace room to get a vibe for summer. Your poem reads well though, with lots of references to the summer fun.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
This trinet poem, Summer Delights, is so far off my radar that I would have to stand down in the furnace room to get a vibe for summer. Your poem reads well though, with lots of references to the summer fun.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Hi Bill Thanks for your review but not quite sure what you mean with your reference about Summer delights being off your radar. that you would need to stand in the furnace room to get a vibe.? However as you have rated this 5 stars I assume you actually liked the poem but dont find Summer to you taste. anyway I thank you for your review and time .With many Cheers Christine😃
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It's twenty degrees F here in Michigan.
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Oh I now get it Cold you say wow Twenty degree farenhight brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr yes a furnace would be lovely LOL I hope you have plenty of warm clothes and heaters. My youngest son is currently in Vancouver so It is a little cold their also . My other son is currently is Bali swealtering in humid heat. Stay warm my friend Cheers Christine
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well written fun poem. It inspires fun and it flows well with a day at the beach. Your artwork choice is great.
Angel123
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
I enjoyed reading your well written fun poem. It inspires fun and it flows well with a day at the beach. Your artwork choice is great.
Angel123
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Hi Angel123, With much appreciation for your time to read and review my poem and I am glad it inspired fun as that is how I find Summer I love being warm and brown LOL. Yes I thought this image was cute too
Cheers
Comment from foreverbutterfly
This made me smile, and brought back a lot of lovely memories of holidays with my siblings.
It flowed nicely and kept you interested throughout.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
This made me smile, and brought back a lot of lovely memories of holidays with my siblings.
It flowed nicely and kept you interested throughout.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Hi foreverbutterfly, Many thanks for your review and great rating for my triolet poem and so glad this gave you a smile and brought back lovely memories of Summer holiday gone by. Appreciate your comments Cheers
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
You did a good job with this for a first time. That last stanza has 7 words instead of 6 in the two longer lines but overall very well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
You did a good job with this for a first time. That last stanza has 7 words instead of 6 in the two longer lines but overall very well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Hi Dawn of tomorrow. Thanks for your review and oh yes you are very right I did have 7 words but have now changed the line to 'Do love this time of year' so I thank you so much for alerting me to this ( I think it was the I that threw me out seems funny to have a word just out of one Letter) I enjoyed trying this style and pleased you thought it a good job. With thanks and Cheers
Comment from Drew Delaney
so glad you cleared up what Barbie and Eski was. For a moment I thought you had the doll Barbie smoking. Ha, ha! This is a new form of poetry for me. I think it worked out quite well. Drew xx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
so glad you cleared up what Barbie and Eski was. For a moment I thought you had the doll Barbie smoking. Ha, ha! This is a new form of poetry for me. I think it worked out quite well. Drew xx
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Hi Drew I am glad you dropped by to have a read and yes we Australians have many different terms we use. We shorten most things and many people have no idea what we mean. It like a different language at time and one day I will write a 'Strine' ( short for Australian) poem and that will get you wondering LOL.
Really thankful for your review for my first attemp at this triolet style poem Cheers
Comment from teols2016
Who doesn't love summer. This piece is certainly good at showing us that such a population would most likely be small. I especially like your imagery of beach fun and spending time with family...and everything else as well. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
Who doesn't love summer. This piece is certainly good at showing us that such a population would most likely be small. I especially like your imagery of beach fun and spending time with family...and everything else as well. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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thank you very much teols2016 I am please you enjoyed this appreciate your review and yes Summer is soul warming Cheers