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Comment from dbmccarter
I really like this. Every word is the truth. I am glad you placed in the contest. I did that once and I was so proud. Now hoping one day for a first. Happy 4th of July !!!!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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I really like this. Every word is the truth. I am glad you placed in the contest. I did that once and I was so proud. Now hoping one day for a first. Happy 4th of July !!!!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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thank you db! :-)
Comment from zanya
Interesting poetic Faith Clarity Pyramid - 'it cannot be taught' - perhaps that is the most striking aspect in an age where we think just about everything can be taught even how to win the Loto LOL
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Interesting poetic Faith Clarity Pyramid - 'it cannot be taught' - perhaps that is the most striking aspect in an age where we think just about everything can be taught even how to win the Loto LOL
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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LOL! thank you zanya :)
Comment from poetbear
I am amszed that all my favorote writers are fellow Scorpions.
This is an original and creative work.
I like the image.
It reads well and make sense.
Makes you think and read inbetween the lines.
Hope to review more of your work.
Great out of the box writing.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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I am amszed that all my favorote writers are fellow Scorpions.
This is an original and creative work.
I like the image.
It reads well and make sense.
Makes you think and read inbetween the lines.
Hope to review more of your work.
Great out of the box writing.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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lol! cool! thanx pb! :)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Caligirl, A wonderful poem. Your "coexist" artwork earned your poem the sixth star. I especially liked:
~ FAITH ~
It's hope
uplifts chins
(Indeed, it does, especially in our darkest hour.)
Very good, Shelley. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Hello Caligirl, A wonderful poem. Your "coexist" artwork earned your poem the sixth star. I especially liked:
~ FAITH ~
It's hope
uplifts chins
(Indeed, it does, especially in our darkest hour.)
Very good, Shelley. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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hey lb! haven't "seen" ya around lately! glad your back! :-)
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I never really left. I just don't have endless supplies of money to post or endless amounts of hours to earn some FS pumps while reviewing ... I still do that "workie" thing. Sending you a Jersey Girl smile. Bloomer
Comment from Carrie Carson
I really love this...I just wish more people were on this page.
No spag, good form and flow.
Good luck in the contest!! :) Carrie
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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I really love this...I just wish more people were on this page.
No spag, good form and flow.
Good luck in the contest!! :) Carrie
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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thank you carrie :)
Comment from Ben Colder
What does all the Egyptian writing mean? Faith comes by hearing the word of God. Normally ministered by a preacher or priest.
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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What does all the Egyptian writing mean? Faith comes by hearing the word of God. Normally ministered by a preacher or priest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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what egyptian writing?
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the picture is symbols from 7 religions made into the word "coexist"
i don't understand where you see egyptian writing ?
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Wow. The l ast line is very clever. The whole poem is a work of art...and the message is stronger for it. Good luck in the contest...i should go vote:-)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Hi. Wow. The l ast line is very clever. The whole poem is a work of art...and the message is stronger for it. Good luck in the contest...i should go vote:-)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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thank you pad :)
Comment from c_lucas
Faith is raised from a grain the size of a mustard seed which grows in size to remove mountains of doubt. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Faith is raised from a grain the size of a mustard seed which grows in size to remove mountains of doubt. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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thank you lucas :)
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You're welcome, Shelley. Charlie
Comment from l.raven
Hi Shelley, a small poem with some powerful words...no you can't teach faith...faith is a belief in God...you do or you don't...you listen and you learn through religion...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Hi Shelley, a small poem with some powerful words...no you can't teach faith...faith is a belief in God...you do or you don't...you listen and you learn through religion...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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thank you linda :-)
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so welcome Shelley...xxoo
Comment from Martin Chan
The clarity of faith is a nicely composed faith contest entry poem with syllable count of 1-2-3-5-6-7-8 written with seven lines in three stanzas.The last line is what I admired most.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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The clarity of faith is a nicely composed faith contest entry poem with syllable count of 1-2-3-5-6-7-8 written with seven lines in three stanzas.The last line is what I admired most.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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thank you martin :-)