Love
purpose of love in our Lives6 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
Love can't be denied
It's the soul of our being
The gem of our heart
Solid 5-7-5 syllable count as required for t he contest
True -love can't be denied and here when we have love we mut nurture and keep the flame burning bright
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
Love can't be denied
It's the soul of our being
The gem of our heart
Solid 5-7-5 syllable count as required for t he contest
True -love can't be denied and here when we have love we mut nurture and keep the flame burning bright
Comment Written 09-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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thanks for your kind review
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thanks for your kind review
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thanks for your kind review
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thanks for your kind review
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thanks for your kind review
Comment from zanya
A nice touch here with this 5-7-5 and its view on 'love'- it is the part of us that truly 'can't be denied'. An inspiring image 'gem of our heart'.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
A nice touch here with this 5-7-5 and its view on 'love'- it is the part of us that truly 'can't be denied'. An inspiring image 'gem of our heart'.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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thanks Zanya
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thanks Zanya
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thanks Zanya
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thanks Zanya
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thanks Zanya
Comment from Cajungirl
Perfect syllable and line count, love is the most powerful of all emotions. It stirs up most of our other emotions. best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
Perfect syllable and line count, love is the most powerful of all emotions. It stirs up most of our other emotions. best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated
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thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated
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thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated
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thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated
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thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated
Comment from LorraineK
I liked the illustration. A great poem that says so much in so few words. Every word, well chosen. Good luck in the contest. LorraineK
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
I liked the illustration. A great poem that says so much in so few words. Every word, well chosen. Good luck in the contest. LorraineK
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review
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thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review
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thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review
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thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review
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thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review
Comment from Crunchie
A beautiful description of love in so few words' well done dear writer.
Thoughtful use of words and metaphor help the reader to grasp a little of the writers heart of love.
Good luck in the contest
Shalom,
Crunchie x
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
A beautiful description of love in so few words' well done dear writer.
Thoughtful use of words and metaphor help the reader to grasp a little of the writers heart of love.
Good luck in the contest
Shalom,
Crunchie x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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thanks so much Crunchie. Am deeply encouraged by your comment
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thanks so much Crunchie. Am deeply encouraged by your comment
Comment from skye
Terrific 5-7-5, using form and rules well.
You have captured the essence of love. Truly the soul and gem of life.
Excellent, with lovely color choice.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
Terrific 5-7-5, using form and rules well.
You have captured the essence of love. Truly the soul and gem of life.
Excellent, with lovely color choice.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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thank you skye. Am impressed that you could be so detailed as to even notice the color. am grateful
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thank you skye. Am impressed that you could be so detailed as to even notice the color. am grateful