Lost wishes
Wishes that I forgot to fulfill2 total reviews
Comment from angelmagnet
oops! Only six syllables in your second line. I think, for a 575 poetry contest, you should adhere to the most basic contest rules. Your poem is promising and maybe just needs revising. Maybe the second line could be "I hide my wishes up there." Good luck
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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oops! Only six syllables in your second line. I think, for a 575 poetry contest, you should adhere to the most basic contest rules. Your poem is promising and maybe just needs revising. Maybe the second line could be "I hide my wishes up there." Good luck
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you, Mam'. I have made that correction.
Comment from Indie Skreet
good little 5-7-5 and i wish you luck for the competition ..................................................................Indie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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good little 5-7-5 and i wish you luck for the competition ..................................................................Indie
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank You..:)
