Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Musing"Small and Specialty Poems
9 total reviews
Comment from tedanytime
Fine thoughts to capture. I think I see a rhyme despite trying to remember not to...
Quips appear night and day and often come when one is not aware.
You could be right about the nymphs, they are said to blow out vapors to capture mens thoughts, or induce thoughts, etc.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
Fine thoughts to capture. I think I see a rhyme despite trying to remember not to...
Quips appear night and day and often come when one is not aware.
You could be right about the nymphs, they are said to blow out vapors to capture mens thoughts, or induce thoughts, etc.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
-
Thanks Tedanytime see those rhymes just snuck in there on me :-/
Comment from dmt1967
Sometimes thinking is bad for you it makes you brood as well as muse very well planned out poem I like the picture thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
Sometimes thinking is bad for you it makes you brood as well as muse very well planned out poem I like the picture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
-
Thanks dmt.
Comment from Cliff Ashpaugh
Hi Treischel. Very a-musing. Can't say I've ever mused for hours at a time, probably more like minutes, but accumulated they could possibly stack up to hours. I appreciate that you didn't clutter the poem up with punctuation. Thank you, Cliff
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
Hi Treischel. Very a-musing. Can't say I've ever mused for hours at a time, probably more like minutes, but accumulated they could possibly stack up to hours. I appreciate that you didn't clutter the poem up with punctuation. Thank you, Cliff
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
-
Thanks Cliff.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Interesting. It does look like that! I know what you are saying. It's hard to catch a muse. Gather those thoughts and build a poem around them. My daily thing. Good job. Nancy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
Interesting. It does look like that! I know what you are saying. It's hard to catch a muse. Gather those thoughts and build a poem around them. My daily thing. Good job. Nancy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
-
Thank you Nancy. For sure! :)
Comment from Robin Gilmor
A lovely free verse with a great picture for calm visual presentation. Yes we do have fleeting quips that come and go and sometimes end up on our page.
Nice thought, that moves freely. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
A lovely free verse with a great picture for calm visual presentation. Yes we do have fleeting quips that come and go and sometimes end up on our page.
Nice thought, that moves freely. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
-
Thank you Robin. Hugs,
Comment from PoeticXscape
This is a very nice poem but isn't the first word while? I have not come across the wile spelling. Unless it has different meanings. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
This is a very nice poem but isn't the first word while? I have not come across the wile spelling. Unless it has different meanings. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
-
Thanks. No, you wile away the hours. My Websters Collegiate has it.
Comment from sunnilicious
Gardens and muses seem to fit well together. This is well thought out and nicely written. Good photograph. Good job. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
Gardens and muses seem to fit well together. This is well thought out and nicely written. Good photograph. Good job. Keep it up.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013
-
Thank you sunnilicious.
Comment from RodG
I spend much of my time like the speaker of this poem. I love the final line. I know this is presumptuous, but I think this poem can be compressed into a marvelous haiku. RodG
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
I spend much of my time like the speaker of this poem. I love the final line. I know this is presumptuous, but I think this poem can be compressed into a marvelous haiku. RodG
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
-
Thanks Rod. Worth a thought.
Comment from Gungalo
Wile away in reverie
The hours, the hours
Passing quickly in deep thought
Quips come and go
A mental show
Scraps to put upon the page
Well you do have the one rhyme go/show here. LOL. THe time spent in gathering mental scraps for your page is generally worth it. Though some folks think the dumbest things are worth an attempt at poetry.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
Wile away in reverie
The hours, the hours
Passing quickly in deep thought
Quips come and go
A mental show
Scraps to put upon the page
Well you do have the one rhyme go/show here. LOL. THe time spent in gathering mental scraps for your page is generally worth it. Though some folks think the dumbest things are worth an attempt at poetry.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
-
Thanks Gungalo. Accidental rhyme. I just can't help myself, LOL.
-
LOL.