Eternal Music
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Comment from mermaids
Aaaaahh...there is a lovely feeling in your words. Dancing near a lake on a pier brings forth good feelings. Your words fit the picture perfectly. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic form.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
Aaaaahh...there is a lovely feeling in your words. Dancing near a lake on a pier brings forth good feelings. Your words fit the picture perfectly. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic form.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your concise, yet thorough review, mermaids.
dragonpoet
Comment from Boogienights
This is beautiful and romantic, and your picture pairs well with your words. I do believe we all have music inside of our souls and we all need to dance. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
This is beautiful and romantic, and your picture pairs well with your words. I do believe we all have music inside of our souls and we all need to dance. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your nice review, Booginights.
dragonpoet
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well, Joan, this is quite the ekphrastic poem you've got I can imagine the swaying to the music as I read this piece, it is engaging and inviting me to dance! To eternal music of our souls, is an excellent ending, I applaud your joining in the fun! The "picture this" must be loads of fun and enjoyment for you and others who belong!
Take care, my friend,
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
Well, Joan, this is quite the ekphrastic poem you've got I can imagine the swaying to the music as I read this piece, it is engaging and inviting me to dance! To eternal music of our souls, is an excellent ending, I applaud your joining in the fun! The "picture this" must be loads of fun and enjoyment for you and others who belong!
Take care, my friend,
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed it. I really like the picture this club. I have been a member for a couple of years now. I also like writing poems from lists of given words.
Joan
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this very short poem. It describes the picture so well and creates a very atmospheric scene. Well done. All the best. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
I really like this very short poem. It describes the picture so well and creates a very atmospheric scene. Well done. All the best. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Jen, for your kind words about my poem.
Joan
Comment from lauralumummu
Very nice, the picture suits the lovely words. Romantic and sweet. I wish listening or floating were in there somewhere, just me perhaps. All the best, Laura
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
Very nice, the picture suits the lovely words. Romantic and sweet. I wish listening or floating were in there somewhere, just me perhaps. All the best, Laura
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Laura,
Thanks for the review and possible editing aids.
Joan
Comment from Mark D. R.
A beautiful illustration is paired with your club entry. One easily imagines this scene. Not quite sure if 'of' is the best choice: music in..., music for...?
Not a fan of initial caps for short poems, but if you insist, then include a period following your last line. Consider increasing your font size. IMHO it will add a punch to your presentation.
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
A beautiful illustration is paired with your club entry. One easily imagines this scene. Not quite sure if 'of' is the best choice: music in..., music for...?
Not a fan of initial caps for short poems, but if you insist, then include a period following your last line. Consider increasing your font size. IMHO it will add a punch to your presentation.
Mark
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review and editing help, Mark.
I will check out the use 'of'.
Joan
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is quite lovely. The picture is soft and romantic. The imagery evoked by your words is quite vivid. I can see this couple waltzing through life until the their days. Nice job.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
This is quite lovely. The picture is soft and romantic. The imagery evoked by your words is quite vivid. I can see this couple waltzing through life until the their days. Nice job.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the positive comments and high rating. I appreciate both.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
It's quite likely that you associate a certain type of song with all the different phases in your life. There may be dozens of songs that bring back wonderfully joyful memories but also songs that remind you about heartbreaking moments.I like this short romantic poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
It's quite likely that you associate a certain type of song with all the different phases in your life. There may be dozens of songs that bring back wonderfully joyful memories but also songs that remind you about heartbreaking moments.I like this short romantic poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, Sshardri
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Magical words here of cheer and happiness and if we can still hold such magic inside us after years of being with one person, then we have definitely found our soul mate, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
Magical words here of cheer and happiness and if we can still hold such magic inside us after years of being with one person, then we have definitely found our soul mate, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem, Dolly. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan
Comment from Hitcher
It is becoming a bit of a dying art, romantic, hold each other close, real close eloquent dancing. It is beautiful to watch and even better if one has the skills to do : )) An excellent, imaginative fusion of poetry and picture, well done!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
It is becoming a bit of a dying art, romantic, hold each other close, real close eloquent dancing. It is beautiful to watch and even better if one has the skills to do : )) An excellent, imaginative fusion of poetry and picture, well done!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Hitcher, for your kind and encouraging words. And for all the stars.
Joan