_Faith_
15 syllable poem4 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Looks like the rain must have come too late for those blooms. But fortunately, the plant might be nourished in time to save the next blossoms. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
Looks like the rain must have come too late for those blooms. But fortunately, the plant might be nourished in time to save the next blossoms. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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many thanks, Ric. G
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. The picture definitely showed the duet of roses pleading for rain. Your words enhanced this request for rain. It left me misty eyed. Well done and enjoyed.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
Good luck wishes for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. The picture definitely showed the duet of roses pleading for rain. Your words enhanced this request for rain. It left me misty eyed. Well done and enjoyed.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Much appreciated as always. G
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most welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, G.
-You have used your
15 syllables well with
a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery
with the blossom, sun, and rain.
-A good message about conditions
many are facing with the lack of
rain, which could also be a
symbol representing your title.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
-Good artwork, G.
-You have used your
15 syllables well with
a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery
with the blossom, sun, and rain.
-A good message about conditions
many are facing with the lack of
rain, which could also be a
symbol representing your title.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Much appreciated. G
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You are welcome.
Comment from muffinmama
This poem evoked such sadness in me. I know everything must die, but it should not be for lack of nourishment.
So poignant. The image of praying for sustenance is quite powerful.
Thank you for the post.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
This poem evoked such sadness in me. I know everything must die, but it should not be for lack of nourishment.
So poignant. The image of praying for sustenance is quite powerful.
Thank you for the post.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Much appreciated. GMG