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Comment from robyn corum
Iza,
Well, I can't believe he actually came clean! I would have expected him to come up with some other excuse. Certainly not agree to do the dirtiest jobs in the building. Maybe he has a heart, after all. hahaha
A small note:
the anti-Coronella test.
--> as far as I know, Coronella is a kind of snake?
Thanks!
Iza,
Well, I can't believe he actually came clean! I would have expected him to come up with some other excuse. Certainly not agree to do the dirtiest jobs in the building. Maybe he has a heart, after all. hahaha
A small note:
the anti-Coronella test.
--> as far as I know, Coronella is a kind of snake?
Thanks!
Comment Written 11-May-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your satire script, Iza. You did a good job with the two characters played by one individual. Your lines read true, and a bit funny, but serious at the same time. Your script was well thought out and presented.
Respectfully, Jan
I enjoyed your satire script, Iza. You did a good job with the two characters played by one individual. Your lines read true, and a bit funny, but serious at the same time. Your script was well thought out and presented.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-May-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have had to have 2 COVID tests, because I needed a surgery and the first one didn't get back in time for the surgery so the surgery had to be rescheduled and, of course, another COVID test. I need another surgery Thursday and have to go Monday for another COVID test, even though I am completely vaccinated. I do understand.
I have had to have 2 COVID tests, because I needed a surgery and the first one didn't get back in time for the surgery so the surgery had to be rescheduled and, of course, another COVID test. I need another surgery Thursday and have to go Monday for another COVID test, even though I am completely vaccinated. I do understand.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from estory
I think you have great fun here with this banter. I loved the part where you suggest the evil me gets the coronavirus test in the ass, if he doesnt want it in the royal nose. And not wanting to go back to the time before orange juice and pot. Loved the personality you put in here. estory
I think you have great fun here with this banter. I loved the part where you suggest the evil me gets the coronavirus test in the ass, if he doesnt want it in the royal nose. And not wanting to go back to the time before orange juice and pot. Loved the personality you put in here. estory
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from royowen
I realise the trouble that evil me has caused you, but the reason she can't can't catch Corona is because she's a figment, and only you can catch, ain't that a hotch, beautifully and imaginatively written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
I realise the trouble that evil me has caused you, but the reason she can't can't catch Corona is because she's a figment, and only you can catch, ain't that a hotch, beautifully and imaginatively written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you so much Mr. Roy and happy mother;s day:)
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You too Iza
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Bless you
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This idea of having the same character play an evil and a normal person can only provide a certain amount of variety. I think you are approaching your limit now and should start planning your next project.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
This idea of having the same character play an evil and a normal person can only provide a certain amount of variety. I think you are approaching your limit now and should start planning your next project.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Yup you are so right:) I am quite done:)
Comment from lyenochka
Hmm. ME does not trust Hamelcito but I'm now wondering what kind of "entertainment" job that ME has found. Fun script post!
accidentally got alieve? (alive?)
Wha your royal ass (What)
let the history takes it course. (take its)
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
Hmm. ME does not trust Hamelcito but I'm now wondering what kind of "entertainment" job that ME has found. Fun script post!
accidentally got alieve? (alive?)
Wha your royal ass (What)
let the history takes it course. (take its)
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you so much my dear friend and have a good night:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Hilarious--up your royal ass!
accidentally got alieve=>WHAT?
WHAT WOULD your royal ass like to eat today?
And don't even think about TRICKING me again.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
Hilarious--up your royal ass!
accidentally got alieve=>WHAT?
WHAT WOULD your royal ass like to eat today?
And don't even think about TRICKING me again.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you so much Liz:)