Ten Worms Emerged
a counting poem for children141 total reviews
Comment from Joe_P
This is a lovely poem. It ranks right up there with childhood rhymes like "Itsy Bitsy Spider" and others. I love the rhythm. It can become a song.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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This is a lovely poem. It ranks right up there with childhood rhymes like "Itsy Bitsy Spider" and others. I love the rhythm. It can become a song.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Joe :-) Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem my friend about these eight worms. Very pretty picture of this Robin with a worm. Good word flow and rhyming make it enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Good poem my friend about these eight worms. Very pretty picture of this Robin with a worm. Good word flow and rhyming make it enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thankyou, G Winterwin, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Jay Squires
In your inimitable clever style, Brooke you've given us the lyrics to put a tune to and add to the lexicon of drinking songs.
Funny, I know you had a lot of fun writing this.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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In your inimitable clever style, Brooke you've given us the lyrics to put a tune to and add to the lexicon of drinking songs.
Funny, I know you had a lot of fun writing this.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Jay, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rjpurdy
A wonderful counting poem Brooke. I had much fun counting them down those poor dear worms. This poem meets your high standard of excellence as always. It is just plain fun. I have a two year old grandaughter. I plan on printing this and pasting it my fridge (with other treasures)and share it with my baby Lila. Thank you so much. Your diversity is amazing.
~Peace~ Rod
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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A wonderful counting poem Brooke. I had much fun counting them down those poor dear worms. This poem meets your high standard of excellence as always. It is just plain fun. I have a two year old grandaughter. I plan on printing this and pasting it my fridge (with other treasures)and share it with my baby Lila. Thank you so much. Your diversity is amazing.
~Peace~ Rod
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
If she ain't a mess, Sawyer. Grandmother has done it again.Sure glad I looked at the front page and saw thins before I called it a night. Well done, Brooke. Blessings to you and the family.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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If she ain't a mess, Sawyer. Grandmother has done it again.Sure glad I looked at the front page and saw thins before I called it a night. Well done, Brooke. Blessings to you and the family.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Ben :-) Brooke
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Still missing keys, old eyes hanging in here as good, as expected, I suppose.
Comment from Craigitar
This is a fun, engaging and happy poem. Well, it wasn't so happy for the nine worms that didn't make it, but somehow my spirit was buoyed by the time there was only one. I never thought of myself as someone with issues concerning worms, but how else can my reaction to the fate of the nine be explained? Anyway, Brooke, great job as always.
Craig
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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This is a fun, engaging and happy poem. Well, it wasn't so happy for the nine worms that didn't make it, but somehow my spirit was buoyed by the time there was only one. I never thought of myself as someone with issues concerning worms, but how else can my reaction to the fate of the nine be explained? Anyway, Brooke, great job as always.
Craig
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Craig, thank you so much :-) I definitely have issues. They gross me out more than any other creature. Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
I'll bet Sawyer loves this poem, Brooke! What a lucky kid to have a grandmother who can right such amazing poems. Not only is it a fun read, it's also educational.
It's such great fun (and sad) to read about the fates of these poor little worms as they dwindle down to one. Great rhyming and alliteration. I particularly like the stanza about the four hard of hearing worms. Who woulda' thunk?
Thanks for sharing, my friend. Have a great night! Alana
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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I'll bet Sawyer loves this poem, Brooke! What a lucky kid to have a grandmother who can right such amazing poems. Not only is it a fun read, it's also educational.
It's such great fun (and sad) to read about the fates of these poor little worms as they dwindle down to one. Great rhyming and alliteration. I particularly like the stanza about the four hard of hearing worms. Who woulda' thunk?
Thanks for sharing, my friend. Have a great night! Alana
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Alana :-) I'm the lucky one in this relationship :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
Another delightful poem , my granddaughter love that style...
As always , perfect style Entertaining great imagery.
I am glad they survived the crow.. LOL. Pili
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Another delightful poem , my granddaughter love that style...
As always , perfect style Entertaining great imagery.
I am glad they survived the crow.. LOL. Pili
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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My pleasure. Pili
Comment from krys123
Brooke;
"for worms were hard of hearing as they went out to romp--one never heard those footsteps until he felt them stomp." Humorous, delightfully funny, ingeniously creative,
and remarkably inventive I just some of the things that this poem offers to the reader.
A great children's poem that is written very well and very enjoyable to read. The rhyming in the rhythm is authentic and excellent and the rhyming is neither forced nor labored while it helps the rhythmic flow.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Brooke;
"for worms were hard of hearing as they went out to romp--one never heard those footsteps until he felt them stomp." Humorous, delightfully funny, ingeniously creative,
and remarkably inventive I just some of the things that this poem offers to the reader.
A great children's poem that is written very well and very enjoyable to read. The rhyming in the rhythm is authentic and excellent and the rhyming is neither forced nor labored while it helps the rhythmic flow.
Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Alex, thank you so much for such great comments!! :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke.
Cheers
Alex
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This is great, Brooke. It reminds me of things that my mother read to me as a child and hooked me on reading.
Have a great night. Bruce.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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This is great, Brooke. It reminds me of things that my mother read to me as a child and hooked me on reading.
Have a great night. Bruce.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Bruce, thank you so much for your generous review :-) Brooke
