Rain is Falling
quatrains in 7/7/7/7149 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
What a terrific poem for the kiddies and us big kids as well. Of course a wizard was responsible for the golden result. Unfortunately, he clips hair from the children while they're asleep to speed up the growth of the flowers. Aren't I awful, hee hee.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke,
What a terrific poem for the kiddies and us big kids as well. Of course a wizard was responsible for the golden result. Unfortunately, he clips hair from the children while they're asleep to speed up the growth of the flowers. Aren't I awful, hee hee.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Lou, thank you so much, my friend, for the laugh and the review :-) Great way to get kids to go to sleep when you want them to LOL
Brooke
Comment from evilynne
Rain can be wonderful to watch and listen to, especially during childhood. You describe the wonders of nature so well. Best of luck, as always, in the contest!! Evi
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Rain can be wonderful to watch and listen to, especially during childhood. You describe the wonders of nature so well. Best of luck, as always, in the contest!! Evi
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Evi, for your insights and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Crunchie
Absolutely lovely rhythm to this poem, you can feel the rain mounting up and you progess thorough the beautiful description of nature and the Wizards, welcoming the rain. Beautiful storytelling throughout, enjoyable for both young and old alike xxCrunchie.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Absolutely lovely rhythm to this poem, you can feel the rain mounting up and you progess thorough the beautiful description of nature and the Wizards, welcoming the rain. Beautiful storytelling throughout, enjoyable for both young and old alike xxCrunchie.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Crunchie, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from rod007
This is a wonderful poem and portrays vividly the magic of rain and how it creates flowers with its nourishment. But then it was wizards at work to make the perfect lawn as the children laugh. Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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This is a wonderful poem and portrays vividly the magic of rain and how it creates flowers with its nourishment. But then it was wizards at work to make the perfect lawn as the children laugh. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
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rod, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from emrpoems
Another great one Brooke. Children will love this and you have put that human element of Grandpa and Grandma which children always pay attention too.
good quatrains with rhymed couplets
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Another great one Brooke. Children will love this and you have put that human element of Grandpa and Grandma which children always pay attention too.
good quatrains with rhymed couplets
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mfowler
Exceptional rhythm dominates this charming piece for me, Brooke. The verses with the rain and the countining just called me to read with a rain drumming rhythm. Lovely work.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Exceptional rhythm dominates this charming piece for me, Brooke. The verses with the rain and the countining just called me to read with a rain drumming rhythm. Lovely work.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Mark, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Brooke. Again such a wonderful children poem. Excellent use of rhythm, like the rhythm of the rain,smooth flow and unforced rhyme. Such a pleasure to read!!!! Fia
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke. Again such a wonderful children poem. Excellent use of rhythm, like the rhythm of the rain,smooth flow and unforced rhyme. Such a pleasure to read!!!! Fia
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Fia, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
Grandpa's way to logical, and probably can't explain how the seed thing actually works anyway. Grandma knows a thrifty explanation (amusing too) and delivers flowers. You worked those seven syllables maxed. Kenny
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Grandpa's way to logical, and probably can't explain how the seed thing actually works anyway. Grandma knows a thrifty explanation (amusing too) and delivers flowers. You worked those seven syllables maxed. Kenny
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Kenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jaded831
Like a child, young or old, I choose to believe the wizards made the gold. Your poem is lots of fun and surely made me smile. You definitely make a rainy day fun, and full of action.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Like a child, young or old, I choose to believe the wizards made the gold. Your poem is lots of fun and surely made me smile. You definitely make a rainy day fun, and full of action.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Jaded, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
LOVELY CHILDREN'S POEM.WELL DONE. I LIKE THE WIZARD TWIST TO IT.WONDER IF GRANDMA OR GRANDPA IS RIGHT.BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST.IT CERTAINLY MADE ME SMILE. WELL DONE!
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LOVELY CHILDREN'S POEM.WELL DONE. I LIKE THE WIZARD TWIST TO IT.WONDER IF GRANDMA OR GRANDPA IS RIGHT.BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST.IT CERTAINLY MADE ME SMILE. WELL DONE!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Chigysiski, thank you so much :-) Brooke
