Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from doris1022
no major errors but boy is that a long write. lost me a little there. enjyoed reading today! hope your creativity is increased this week. and flowing like the river nile into the oceans splender. you get my vote!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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no major errors but boy is that a long write. lost me a little there. enjyoed reading today! hope your creativity is increased this week. and flowing like the river nile into the oceans splender. you get my vote!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Nathan and I thank you so very much for a rewarding review, Doris.
Comment from Keronica
This was a simply amazing read! Wonderful, and oh, so romantic! I see you wrote this with another writer... your lover perhaps? Tee hee~! Great work! Thank you for sharing, Gungalo Soldia! ;-)
~K
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This was a simply amazing read! Wonderful, and oh, so romantic! I see you wrote this with another writer... your lover perhaps? Tee hee~! Great work! Thank you for sharing, Gungalo Soldia! ;-)
~K
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thanks so very much Keronica. Nathan and I appreciate very much all the nice thing you said.
Comment from Ralph Miller
And lovely interlinked mystical sonnets they were. Very nicely done, both of you. Guess you wrote one each, one after the other. I'll show Lyn that one when she arrives home this afternoon.
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And lovely interlinked mystical sonnets they were. Very nicely done, both of you. Guess you wrote one each, one after the other. I'll show Lyn that one when she arrives home this afternoon.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Sigh yes and both of us, Nathan and I, thank you so very much Ralph. What a wondrous review.
Comment from mizzkris20
OMG! This is beautiful and romantic
Every line was magical. I enjoyed reading
your poem....You def deserve a six star rating.
Awesome job!
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OMG! This is beautiful and romantic
Every line was magical. I enjoyed reading
your poem....You def deserve a six star rating.
Awesome job!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Hay Kris! Nathank and I want to say thanks for a very beautiful review of this. You left a wonderful one here.
Comment from Mishelly
This spoke directly to my heart. Each line was a beautiful romance playing out. I am such a romantic, and the magic in this is truly exquisite. I especially love the line:
My world is made of all your endless sighs
I am so amazed by some of the talent I've come across on Fanstory, and your talent is up there with the highest :-)
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This spoke directly to my heart. Each line was a beautiful romance playing out. I am such a romantic, and the magic in this is truly exquisite. I especially love the line:
My world is made of all your endless sighs
I am so amazed by some of the talent I've come across on Fanstory, and your talent is up there with the highest :-)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Sigh, Nathan and I are proud to have you review this one Mishelly. Thank you so very much.
Comment from Larissa B
So sweet you are there gathered in my hands,
where we are intertwined in graceful peace
as turquoise waters lap against the sands,
it's then I know our love shall never cease.
There are too many great lines in this awesome crown of sonnets... you could easily win that sonnet contest on right now. The images you paint here are so dreamy... one part made me picture EDEN.
Wish we could live/love like this!~_~
blaze
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So sweet you are there gathered in my hands,
where we are intertwined in graceful peace
as turquoise waters lap against the sands,
it's then I know our love shall never cease.
There are too many great lines in this awesome crown of sonnets... you could easily win that sonnet contest on right now. The images you paint here are so dreamy... one part made me picture EDEN.
Wish we could live/love like this!~_~
blaze
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Hi Blaze!! Nathan and I both thank you so much for a really wonderful review Some of us actually do girl. Sigh ...
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re- my last statement...I should've said 'I'.
To live near the waters with my beloved is a dream. Sometimes, with hurricanes, we think twice on that dream!lol!!:)
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Well you don't have it over us down here in the islands though. Heheh.
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yeah... that's the real paradise right there!:)
Comment from Mai Mai
This is a vary nice piece. I like the way each stanza refers back to the previous and I like the "tender" love story being revealed. Good work and good luck.
Mai Mai
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This is a vary nice piece. I like the way each stanza refers back to the previous and I like the "tender" love story being revealed. Good work and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
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Sigh Mai Mai, this is a wonderful review of this one
and Nathan and I thank you so much.
Comment from oozer
Really enjoyed smoothness of these sonnets. I would have to commend those extremely well put together lines. I can see that the rhyming pattern would have called for some manipulative skill. A work to be proud of.
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Really enjoyed smoothness of these sonnets. I would have to commend those extremely well put together lines. I can see that the rhyming pattern would have called for some manipulative skill. A work to be proud of.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
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Boy Oozer, Nathan and I thank you so much
for the wonderful review of this one.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem my friend somewhat long for you it was nice reading it as always I enjoyed it very much and I liked the picture thank you for sharing
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This is a good poem my friend somewhat long for you it was nice reading it as always I enjoyed it very much and I liked the picture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thanks DMT from both Nathan and I. It's long because the format calls for it to be. Crown of Sonnets is seven sonnets long. Thanks again for reviewing this one.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
My goodness!! This is superb -
the content, the flow to the
words, and to both rhythm
and rhyme, all exceptional..
all in all, most impressive and deserving of a six...
which I'm so pleased I can give, Pam.
Margaret
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My goodness!! This is superb -
the content, the flow to the
words, and to both rhythm
and rhyme, all exceptional..
all in all, most impressive and deserving of a six...
which I'm so pleased I can give, Pam.
Margaret
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Ohhh Margaret, Nathan and I both send our thanks
to you for such a wonderful review.
