The Crown for Vegas
Crown of Heroic Sonnets115 total reviews
Comment from peggles
I liked this very much
and thought it to be well expressed and very creative in its content
the rhyme and the rhythm were excellent
The story was interesting and held my attention
This was a well written piece
well done
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
I liked this very much
and thought it to be well expressed and very creative in its content
the rhyme and the rhythm were excellent
The story was interesting and held my attention
This was a well written piece
well done
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from pickthorn
A lovely poem with great imagery. You describe Vegas really well and you describe the beauty of the surrounding scenery perfectly. But Vegas didn't treat me too kindly during my visit to that gambling mecca. I was lucky I had a credit card to get back home.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
A lovely poem with great imagery. You describe Vegas really well and you describe the beauty of the surrounding scenery perfectly. But Vegas didn't treat me too kindly during my visit to that gambling mecca. I was lucky I had a credit card to get back home.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the great review. Vegas is multidimensional, and gambling is only one facet of it
Comment from Herb
Well that was certainly a 'mouth full'
I can only tip my hat to a poet much more skilled than I. One sonnet is hard enough.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
Well that was certainly a 'mouth full'
I can only tip my hat to a poet much more skilled than I. One sonnet is hard enough.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your thorough, and very helpful review.
Comment from Anisa-
This is an interesting and enjoyable poem. I like the imagery in it. Great job on this creative write. Fantastic picture choice, too. Well done, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
This is an interesting and enjoyable poem. I like the imagery in it. Great job on this creative write. Fantastic picture choice, too. Well done, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the great review
Comment from Zombie's Woof
Hi-
Great place, like any gambling town,
to lose your shirt and maybe everything.
Although I just read it quickly, I
did notice that your meter was perfect
and the imagery was quite fine.
Lot of work, this one...
Nice job! ZW
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
Hi-
Great place, like any gambling town,
to lose your shirt and maybe everything.
Although I just read it quickly, I
did notice that your meter was perfect
and the imagery was quite fine.
Lot of work, this one...
Nice job! ZW
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from rchitwood
I have heard that Vegas is a very beautiful place. I could feel the love you have for the deserts and the mountains and valleys. Very good structure and smooth flow as well as creative description. Your photo is very lovely and goes well with your poem. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
I have heard that Vegas is a very beautiful place. I could feel the love you have for the deserts and the mountains and valleys. Very good structure and smooth flow as well as creative description. Your photo is very lovely and goes well with your poem. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review, Rita. It means a lot to me. Blessings and love, Yelena
Comment from TammyGail
yeltel this was just wow, what a poem indeed
I loved the Sonnets, always thought this form has such a romantic flow to it beat. Your poem was deep and touching, heartfelt and very well written. Stunning imagery used, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
yeltel this was just wow, what a poem indeed
I loved the Sonnets, always thought this form has such a romantic flow to it beat. Your poem was deep and touching, heartfelt and very well written. Stunning imagery used, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the amazing review, Tammy. It means a lot to me. Love and blessings, Y.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
An absolute must to read! Your sonnets are amazing, really easy to read, excellent flow, a great story, amazing imagery.
And after the pain at the beginning of your poem, a feeling of wellbeing at the end. A classic well penned poem. An excellent contest entry. xsx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
An absolute must to read! Your sonnets are amazing, really easy to read, excellent flow, a great story, amazing imagery.
And after the pain at the beginning of your poem, a feeling of wellbeing at the end. A classic well penned poem. An excellent contest entry. xsx
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your faith in my work. They mean the world to me. Love, Y.
Comment from mumsyone
I enjoyed reading your crown on sonnets--probably the best I've ever read here on FanStory. Every part is easy to read and understand and it does not get boring, as some do. Good work!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
I enjoyed reading your crown on sonnets--probably the best I've ever read here on FanStory. Every part is easy to read and understand and it does not get boring, as some do. Good work!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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Thank you very much for your most gracious review.
Comment from Glasstruth
A well written string of Sonnets with great rhyming and the iambic meter works perfectly throughout. Glad the healing lifted you back. Well crafted! Les
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
A well written string of Sonnets with great rhyming and the iambic meter works perfectly throughout. Glad the healing lifted you back. Well crafted! Les
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review. I appreciate it very much.