Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

This was a great read. The flow and the rhyme were so natural - I could almost hear music while reading your poem. Thank you for capturing a beautiful slice of life. Lou

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2011

Comment from phattp

Excellent

You've certainly managed to conjure an idyllic picture with this. I like the gentle tone and feel of happiness that it has. Good luck in the contest. :) P.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2011

Comment from purrfect tale

Excellent

A lovely and romantic poem. It answers all the points for an idyll poem. Your description of the plants, colors, and smells of the meadow was idyllic.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2011

Comment from Teresa Paul

Excellent

I loved this poem. Makes the reader remember what love is supposed to feel like. Loved the flow. Nothing really to criticize.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2011

Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

NOW THISD BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED POEM simply ddzes rpmancr from start to finish (sorry asbouy the spelling etc, I took termasxepan last night)

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2011