Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Part one. Chapter 7"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from pickthorn
Well things seem to be moving along very well in Anna's life right now. She has some very determined guys helping her out, but I suspect we haven't heard the last of her abusive ex-husband. This story is very well written and entertaining.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Well things seem to be moving along very well in Anna's life right now. She has some very determined guys helping her out, but I suspect we haven't heard the last of her abusive ex-husband. This story is very well written and entertaining.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Bobby will make an appearance again. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Janie King
This is a very interesting story..I keep thinking oh my what if they really make this man mad and when he gets out he does find her. I just checked and made sure it was fiction so I don't have to really be concerned. Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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This is a very interesting story..I keep thinking oh my what if they really make this man mad and when he gets out he does find her. I just checked and made sure it was fiction so I don't have to really be concerned. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it. Even though this is fiction, it is combination of a couple of women's story that I know of.
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oh my, I guess it's a part of their past so worrying about them wouldn't help..God bless.
Comment from rchitwood
Very good and I have been keeping up to see if Bobby does get out and tries to hurt Anna.your story is very believable and it has good dialogue and characters.I would refer this to others.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Very good and I have been keeping up to see if Bobby does get out and tries to hurt Anna.your story is very believable and it has good dialogue and characters.I would refer this to others.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Yes, we will see Bobby again. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Yes nicely done. I liked how you are digging in deeper with meat and potatoes of the story. Having more say into the filler with Anna's problems. Liked how she is being sort of taken under one's wing as she is with Paul and his family.
Thanks for sharing it, great flow, read nicely.
Maureen
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Yes nicely done. I liked how you are digging in deeper with meat and potatoes of the story. Having more say into the filler with Anna's problems. Liked how she is being sort of taken under one's wing as she is with Paul and his family.
Thanks for sharing it, great flow, read nicely.
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Connie P
I'm glad Anna has Betty and Margaret to get her head straight about all the things Bobby programmed her with. I hope he stays in jail.
Notes:
You will need to *(be?) present for that."
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The women returned and Betty passed out the glasses of ice tea and set the plate of cookies on the desk. *(Being from the south we say ice tea but I think it's actually iced tea.)
Connie
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I'm glad Anna has Betty and Margaret to get her head straight about all the things Bobby programmed her with. I hope he stays in jail.
Notes:
You will need to *(be?) present for that."
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The women returned and Betty passed out the glasses of ice tea and set the plate of cookies on the desk. *(Being from the south we say ice tea but I think it's actually iced tea.)
Connie
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for catching that. I am never sure what to do about ice tea. Us northerners say ice tea. I need to see if there's an official way of saying it. I don't even know where to look. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, i'm glad anna is back in the picture and taking action to get a divorce. i noticed a couple of words you left out in a couple of sentences. the first one is the timing was perfect for him, not perfect him, you will need to be present for that not to present that
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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this is very well written, barbara, i'm glad anna is back in the picture and taking action to get a divorce. i noticed a couple of words you left out in a couple of sentences. the first one is the timing was perfect for him, not perfect him, you will need to be present for that not to present that
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I must have been fixing those while you read. Thank you for pointing them out. I don't know where my head was while I was editing.
Comment from bhogg
Barbara - this was written with such a smooth and natural flow. I'm following your story closely, so always look forward to a post. Where you describe the pattern continuing, it is sad. Unfortunately, I've seen it. Sadly, I've also seen women who seem to seek out abusive situations as if they think they deserve it. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Barbara - this was written with such a smooth and natural flow. I'm following your story closely, so always look forward to a post. Where you describe the pattern continuing, it is sad. Unfortunately, I've seen it. Sadly, I've also seen women who seem to seek out abusive situations as if they think they deserve it. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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You're right about seeking out abusers. Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from lola29
I just love Troy and his family. They display what integrity should be about--caring and giving without expecting something in return. Wonderful chapter!
Rodgers is (a) danger
the timing was perfect (for) to tear up the bar
five thousand dollars (worth) of damage
how did (your) meeting go
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I just love Troy and his family. They display what integrity should be about--caring and giving without expecting something in return. Wonderful chapter!
Rodgers is (a) danger
the timing was perfect (for) to tear up the bar
five thousand dollars (worth) of damage
how did (your) meeting go
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for catching those. I thought I was ready to post and when I reread today, I caught numerous errors, and still didn't get them all. I appreciate your help.
Comment from c_lucas
Things are beginning to look up for Anna. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Things are beginning to look up for Anna. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from jadapenn
A lovely chapter, girlfriend. The story is progressing well and I want Troy and Anna to get together. This other fiend is shaping his own noose and will soon hang himself.
Nice comforting home Paul and Betty have and I sense Anna feels safe with them.
Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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A lovely chapter, girlfriend. The story is progressing well and I want Troy and Anna to get together. This other fiend is shaping his own noose and will soon hang himself.
Nice comforting home Paul and Betty have and I sense Anna feels safe with them.
Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and I hope you're feeling better.
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I was very good and stayed in bed like the doctor said. The meds are working. Slept most of the first three days. The winter is not kind this year. Everyone has this strain of flu. luv jada
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I am sorry to hear that. Our summer is extremely hot this year, not good.
