Comment from Writeaway...

Excellent

This novel is exceptionally well written I so wish I could award this a sixer. An excellent job on this piece, Barbara, I look forward to the next chapter, keep writing!! :)

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2011

---

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011

Thank you for the virtual six. I am pleased you thought so well of this post. Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery. Troy and Paul job has become more difficult.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2011

---

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011

Thank you for your kind review and continued support.

reply by c_lucas on 11-Jun-2011

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie

Comment from lola29

Excellent

I'm beginning to wonder if maybe Bobby has something to do with Anna's disappearance; I hope not. She must have been really terrified to leave the way she did. I'm hoping Troy will find her.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2011

---

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Good dialogue throughout as Troy enlists even more help in finding Anna - I do believe he would call out the National Guard if it were in his power :-)
Brooke

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2011

---

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011

I think he would too, or how about the marines?