Sauvignon Blanc Grapes
Artistic Photo in 'Still Life' style200 total reviews
Comment from Phoenyx Prodigy
Beautiful. I love the colors. The transition was smooth between lines.the imagery was great I could see the grapes. I enjoyed it. The message was very clear.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Beautiful. I love the colors. The transition was smooth between lines.the imagery was great I could see the grapes. I enjoyed it. The message was very clear.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2011
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Thanks, PP. That's important: to see the grapes!
Comment from XRESRA
Very nice image. You've utilized this simple form very well. It does read like a simple yet very elegant still life painting. Very easy and pleasing to reflect on.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Very nice image. You've utilized this simple form very well. It does read like a simple yet very elegant still life painting. Very easy and pleasing to reflect on.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Thank you, Xresra. Appreciate your excellent comments.
Comment from Charlene0513
To tomprato,
What better way to express your Haiku poem than the succulent way you have portrayed them in your notes.
Combining the art, good taste and nutritional value you get from them decribes it perfectly.
Charlene
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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To tomprato,
What better way to express your Haiku poem than the succulent way you have portrayed them in your notes.
Combining the art, good taste and nutritional value you get from them decribes it perfectly.
Charlene
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you, Charlene. Succulent is a good word to describe grapes. :)
Comment from The Stranger
between writing what is an excellent senryu and then adding the notes detailing the fact that thee grapes make a particularly popular wine, you have just about covered al angles
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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between writing what is an excellent senryu and then adding the notes detailing the fact that thee grapes make a particularly popular wine, you have just about covered al angles
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thanks. Love your review.
Comment from T.Walker
This is alright but need to catch the of the reader. You said, "Longing for when you visualized this." To me this means you can give me and the reader more.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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This is alright but need to catch the of the reader. You said, "Longing for when you visualized this." To me this means you can give me and the reader more.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Comment from Aarondodd1989
Excellent, I never thought I'd read a Haiku that has that as it's last line. Strong imagery and good form. Missing a complemntary picture though I think. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Excellent, I never thought I'd read a Haiku that has that as it's last line. Strong imagery and good form. Missing a complemntary picture though I think. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you. Do we need pictures for a picturesque haiku like this?
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no... just a personal preference I guess. All my haiku's have pictures... your choice.
Comment from deb552
I'm impressed by your appreciation and knowledge of fine china. Though my knowledge of wine is limited at best, I believe your's come through in this well constructed haiku. I also appreciate your author notes on the wine. I know that Wedgwood is the finest and doubt that you would have matched the grapes that produce this wine with the china, if they were not deserving to be paired.I believe that nature is it's own craftsman, and has it's own sense of elegance. deb
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I'm impressed by your appreciation and knowledge of fine china. Though my knowledge of wine is limited at best, I believe your's come through in this well constructed haiku. I also appreciate your author notes on the wine. I know that Wedgwood is the finest and doubt that you would have matched the grapes that produce this wine with the china, if they were not deserving to be paired.I believe that nature is it's own craftsman, and has it's own sense of elegance. deb
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for a beautiful review.
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It was my pleasure.I'm glad I checked out your profile and look forward to reading more of your works.
Comment from Ekim777
Ah, a haiku in all its simplicity with a hint of alliteration to save the poem; green grapes; white wedgewood; and we can savor the sounds of translucent and Sauvignon vintage.The last line is almost a master stroke; the transformation of those natural elements into something larger and spirited; the wine or the promise of wine; Haiku at its best perhaps. Yet why am I not entirely satisfied?
Ekim
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2011
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Ah, a haiku in all its simplicity with a hint of alliteration to save the poem; green grapes; white wedgewood; and we can savor the sounds of translucent and Sauvignon vintage.The last line is almost a master stroke; the transformation of those natural elements into something larger and spirited; the wine or the promise of wine; Haiku at its best perhaps. Yet why am I not entirely satisfied?
Ekim
Comment Written 25-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2011
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Thanks. Dissatisfaction is a part of existence. If we were satisfied, we would never move forward.
Comment from billyboy123
How did you get all of the viewers? I wonder how people do that. I have a lot of viewers on a few things but I haven't spent a lot of money. I'm just wondering if people have more money to spend then I do. I Love the poem and I learned a little about wine. I like the contract - green and wedgewood.
billyboy123
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2011
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How did you get all of the viewers? I wonder how people do that. I have a lot of viewers on a few things but I haven't spent a lot of money. I'm just wondering if people have more money to spend then I do. I Love the poem and I learned a little about wine. I like the contract - green and wedgewood.
billyboy123
Comment Written 25-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2011
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Thanks, Billyboy
Comment from shirley31
I've never seen translucent grape but i imagine one to be close enough that i see my self! maybe metephor? lets not forget the chianti wine? L:O:L liked it any way!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2011
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I've never seen translucent grape but i imagine one to be close enough that i see my self! maybe metephor? lets not forget the chianti wine? L:O:L liked it any way!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2011
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It's a pity that some people have never seen translucent grapes. They have missed some of the joys of life. (It's spelt 'metaphor' btw.)
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fantastic but seeing as though i pick them every year i could not see it! being in Chiantiand all! L:O:L just a bit of medecine hope it works???? big hugs Tom Prato!!!!
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Btw, it's 'medicine', not 'medecine'. Sorry that you don't seem to have experienced quality grapes or quality wine for that matter.
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classico or not it's all the same in poetry like you have shown in your replies! love you darling poet or not? L:O:L
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medicine and you can paint it any way you want but if you give bad replies you diserve the same! and i believe as a grape picker there is no such grape as a translucent you reep what you saw my friend i will be back to judge if you ever come to mine!!!
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sew not saw just a typo! just incase you want to give me 1 star on my next which i know you wont do unless i diserve it, even if you do i care nothing as i am the queen of typo's and need you on my side!
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I am surprised that people can be so mean-spirited. Too shocking for words. The spelling is atrocious! Even a small word like 'reap' is spelt 'reep'. Sad.
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reep appreciation my dear!
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All your 'L:O:L's sound like spiteful laughter. Anyway, do try to improve your spelling, at least!
It's 'reap' and not 'reep' (as you insist!)
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reap what you sew! LMAO who cares if you have so much to say about others take it and let it go Tom Prat My friend!
